Riffs and Rhymes

[WillNelms]

I like to see you when you smile
Whether you’re happy or sad
If there’s something wrong
Or it’s just this song
I’d like to be with you

When things look down
And you start to cry
I’d like to be by you’re side
You say he’s right
I don’t know why
I’d like to be with you

And when riffs and rhymes are not enough
At least there’s something when we touch
This life is getting rough
You make my heart feel so much pain
But I’ll go on, just the same
I’d like to be with you

I like to talk to you
Every single chance that I get
But these talks they always seem
Yes we seem to talk about him
And I say this will subside
But I try and I try
I want to keep my heart tame
But it’s driving me insane
I’d like to be with you

When God can’t help me anymore
I’ll be there standing at your door
I write these notes saying “I love you”
I know these things are more than true
I’ll even dot the i’s with hearts
But I tear those notes all apart
Maybe I’ll be with you


And when riffs and rhymes are not enough
At least there’s something when we touch
This life is getting rough
You make my heart feel so much pain
But I’ll go on, just the same
I’d like to be with you

And When the Autumn breeze goes down my neck
When everyone’s a jerk
The leaves come down like fireworks
I’d like to share this time
I’d like to be with you

And when riffs and rhymes are not enough
At least theirs something when we touch
My life is getting rough
And it seems like its going to rain
On our parade, it’s driving me insane
You’ll always be in my mind
And when riffs and rhymes are not enough
At least theirs something when we touch
My life its getting rough
You make my heart feel so much pain
But I can go on just the same
I’d like to be with you
Yes, I’d like to be with you

[WillNelms]

Oh FYI in case youyr wondering its a softer song. When i put instruments to it I'll probally add just an acustic guitar

[jster2000]

thats cool
lyrics
i'd want to hear the music with it to

[hf57]

"you make my heart feel so much pain"... really? thats the best you could do?

[WillNelms]

"you make my heart feel so much pain"... really? thats the best you could do?

yeah its not the best. i wrote this song late at night based off of the "when riffs and rhymes are not enough part." i would like to change it im just having a hard time figuring out a better way

[jster2000]

"you make my heart feel so much pain"... really? thats the best you could do?

that is a great point
lol
you can find others parts like it
but its very solid at some points

[hf57]

yeah its not the best. i wrote this song late at night based off of the "when riffs and rhymes are not enough part." i would like to change it im just having a hard time figuring out a better way

its good that you can atleast see where your weak parts are. i know its hard re-writing a song but that line is just so bad i hope you can replace it.