raped ragdoll

[chemicalcrushxx]

her pretty eyes
n her pearly white teeth
her silky hair n her lips so sweet
makes all the guys go crazy
with eye contact they fall in love with her beauty

he kisses her stawberry lips
n through her hair is his fingertips
his tongue touches hers
n its like poison is formed
as she stands still as he continues to go on
it drives her crazy n she asks to stop
but this he does not

on the floor in her room she lies
with her knees to her chin as she cries
as she opens her mouth to sob
she tastes her tears drip into her mouth
can anybody with caring eyes see
all her pain and misery
no they don't they just watch her fall
into a deeper shadow of someone she doesn't know at all
and now she lies as a raped ragdoll

she dressed to kill in her little red dress
the guys stare down at her breasts
doesn't want to notice and drinks her sorrow away
a guy comes over and runs his fingers starting at her neck
and he continues as he goes down her back
she pushes him away and he moves in closer
brings her somewhere in the back

as long as she remains beautiful
she'll always be some raped ragdoll
laying in peices on the floor

[thepunkpig]

i think thats really good.

[chemicalcrushxx]

thanks.does anyone else want to voice their opinion?

[thefalloutgirl]

that sucks. not the poem, but the harassment you get for being beautiful. it ticks me off. nonetheless, cool poem :wink3: what made you write it?