My first try, don't laugh. Advise my friends.

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The pain of my love

I hate her guts,
But love her to pieces.
Of sharp glass which cut me,
I bleed red, deep red.
My passion grows stronger,
I yearn even longer,
This pain, oh this mental torture!
Stabbed in the heart with a blade,
Enchanted with the love of cupids arrow.
Why do you subject me to this sorrow?
Do you laugh at me?
Mock me?
Or love me?

Well there it is. Please give comments i have enjoyed reading work by others and i hope u don't think mines that bad!