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Raistlin
11/21/04, 06:21 PM
In this waking moment
when I remember you
I stare out of this empty hall
I've never felt so screwed

I'm getting pictures,
stained white building
hospitals cold
remember leaving

remember bleeding
remember hoping
remember screaming,
cut wide open

In this waking moment,
just before my dawn
when the dark fades,
turn a new page,
forget where you're coming from

staring out my window
remembering last night
I'm trying to hold on
but you're fading with the light"

The song is about someone running
away from the hospital where someone
he knows is dying, because he can't handle death.
It's inspired by the book "A ring of endless light".

What do you think?

Withdrawnx3
12/04/04, 08:47 PM
i liked the repitition but i didnt really understand what the song was about until you said so..but otherwise its good