Innocence Is Over-Rated (Comments Requested)

[emo_meets_ska?]

So look what Ive become, are you proud now.
I didnt ever mean it to be this way.
Is this what you invisioned
when you told me not to care so much.
Is this how you wanted me to act.
When you told me I should just cheer up.
Well now im happy, but at what cost.
Can it all replace the innocence ive lost.







Hey, this is a song i started like last year and never finished it, but i finially did so tell me what oyu guys think

[emo_meets_ska?]

i fucking suck.. ignore that

[IamNogreatMan]

i fucking suck.. ignore that

Haha, yeah, that is pretty bad.

[Withdrawnx3]

its not that bad =S i think it could be something you could add onto later in another song..i think you could use more meaningful words too if you know what i mean..but its not horrible