By My Side

[MCSmate]

It's gotta be over soon
Or I can't walk away, to you
I need to make it out alive
And turn to you, it's what I have to do
It's finally leaning towards the ending
Another day and I'm fine

Chorus
So stay by my side
And we'll be alright
But there's a time
When there's a flaw in design
It'll be fine, it'll be fine

The travel's too long, but you're worth it
It seems life has only just surfaced
And I haver a hard time staying afloat
I'm sinking under, but starting to tread water, now

Chorus

Soon enough I'll be around
And soon enough you'll find out
That here we go, let's not rip the seams
And when we go, you know what this means
It is what it seems

Chorus

(It'll be fine, It'll be alright)

[a speedo model]

Don't know how I feel about this. The overall idea is nothing new, but that is not necessarily a bad thing. It's more you're approach with imagery and the pacing. It felt very traditional and familiar, bordering on cliche. There were some nice parts, but nothing really stood out to me or blew me away. Overall, it was decent but I know you can do better.