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theESCO
09/11/08, 12:38 AM
Regrets rips flesh
like broken glass through reflections
I tried to offer answers
but only asked more questions
Kissed the tears of an angel
but couldn’t clear the debris
12 months worth the hindsight
it’s looking back that we see
That there was two roads
but at the time there’s only one
Days turn to night
Hell tries to marry the sun

But heaven always wins
and day make another stand
Tried to build an ash palace
but watched the dreams turn to sand
Not for the first time
But I fear it’s the finale
I watch you on your mountain top
And slaughter passions in the valley
And burry them under bushes
In places you’ll never find
Unless you follow the signal fires
Raging in my mind

But who would want to take a chance
On an alcoholic artist
So I scribble down this epitaph
And sign it ‘young and heartless’
And send it off to find you well
In the happiness you’ve found
I wish it was that easy Taurus
I’ll take this to the ground
And even in the afterlife
I’ll hope to see face
I can’t forget your passion angel
I can’t forget your grace

So I bide my time and save your side
The place you used to sleep
I wear your scars and scream your name
To everyone I meet
And even if they won’t listen
I’ll carve it in their heart
So they won’t walk the road I’m on
So they won’t have to start
To live the life I’m living now
Where the bottle's always best
So I take my heart from inside out
And pin it on my chest



white rappers know best.

Idlewarrior
09/11/08, 04:29 PM
This is pretty good, i'm not gonna lie. I doubt a lot of people will read it though, mostly cause of its length, but wow, it is worth the read, you took a semi-cliche` thing, and threw it up pretty rough, thanks for posting :)

theESCO
09/13/08, 08:16 PM
thanks man.

Sic Transit Zeb
09/13/08, 08:22 PM
haha yeah, not bad at all dude