Sticks and Stones May Break My Bones, But Cement Pays Homage To Tradition

[JimGray]

Sticks And Stones May Break My Bones, But Cement Pays Homage to Traditition
They say the fear is what keeps us breathing
and everybody here is so alive
You left a note that said your leaving
And I forgot to say goodbye.

Did you ever share that bullshit
that everyone could share a heartbeat?
I just wanna let go
Don't wanna share no fuckin' heartbeat.

And if every awkward kid woke up
and spilled his guts onto some paper.
Well I guess that I'd be out of a job.
And if everybody spoke up
and realized that they were o-k.

Well are you o-k?

Note: Work in progress, written quickly. I like it guite a bit, but we'll see. It's about leaving home, and leaving so many people behind. There is so much doubt and fear, but it's also exhilerating as balls, so enjoy this please, and share some stories. How is school going for everyone?

[TK]

I'm pretty sure I just flunked my first(There's only 3) Biology exam. I waited till the today to study, and had 14 pages of typed notes, and I even memorized all of them. The problem was, my notetaking skills missed what the majority of the test was.

[xmy.only.exitx]

the "o-k" part with the hyphen is as funny as it could be if not more. :)
just finished exams. a good week of turmoil.

[JimGray]

I'm pretty sure I just flunked my first(There's only 3) Biology exam. I waited till the today to study, and had 14 pages of typed notes, and I even memorized all of them. The problem was, my notetaking skills missed what the majority of the test was.

Exams? The year just started.

That sucks man, best of luck with the rest.

the "o-k" part with the hyphen is as funny as it could be if not more. :)
just finished exams. a good week of turmoil.

You have "dat" in your signature, fail.

[GhostMachine]

Jim...its a been a while. I like this piece. Can't wait to see the finished product.

[lew_1987]

This is pretty good, Jim. I didn't like the 'let go' line though, I think you could have found something better to take it to the next line. Oh, and you're*.

As far as school goes, I just had my graduation ceremony on Wednesday, so I'm looking forward to a life full of nothing.

[JimGray]

Jim...its a been a while. I like this piece. Can't wait to see the finished product.

Thanks a lot man, I was unsure about it, but I'm bringing it to band practice tommorrow sooo...

This is pretty good, Jim. I didn't like the 'let go' line though, I think you could have found something better to take it to the next line. Oh, and you're*.

As far as school goes, I just had my graduation ceremony on Wednesday, so I'm looking forward to a life full of nothing.

Congrats on graduating dudeseph, as for the line you dislike, I have changed that line 10 times, never to my own satisfation.

Thanks for reading guys!

[de la sympathie]

* You're.

Otherwise, very nice little number. I liked it.

[JimGray]

* You're.

Otherwise, very nice little number. I liked it.

Wow, thank you.

I'm really suprised at the response this thing is getting, I didn't expect much from it.

FTW.