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Jackalin
12/08/04, 09:12 AM
well i thought id start out by submitting some of my writing..just a little something i wrote for my cousin a little while ago. tell me what you think..

exfixiation, hard to breathe
your presence heavies the air, choking me
i'm wishing for my lungs to fill with fluid
so i can drown in you.
so that the water envelopes my sunken eyes
and im blinded to everything
but you