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beau blood rush
09/14/08, 09:28 AM
*This song is most likely not what you think it's about.






This is me in the gutter,
out front your house
watchin myself pick myself up
pawn shop heart
trade me up

and head, take me home
alone along the boardwalk,
i've talked my way out of,
so many times before

but tonight, i, am dancing right off of my chest
when i fell in love all over again
i'll sacrifice my loneliness
it's true
i'm makin myself a mess for two

i'm falling in love
or falling apart
forever stitch'n myself back to life
kissin' my good name
goodbye

billboard my blues
i'm makin a hit, outta you yet
sit me on your roof
so i can fall in love with you

but tonight, i, am dancing right off of my chest
when i fell in love all over again
i'll sacrifice my loneliness
it's true
i'm makin myself a mess for two

makin myself a mess for you

beau blood rush
09/15/08, 07:55 AM
bump cash.

#WhiteFender#
09/15/08, 10:23 PM
i like it alot.

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beau blood rush
09/17/08, 05:55 AM
sick thanks alot
whats with all the random letters and number but?

.invisible ink.
09/17/08, 07:01 AM
i like it as well.

beau blood rush
09/17/08, 07:28 AM
thankyou, it seems only girls on this forum like my stuff
xx

3ChinaPolicy
09/18/08, 03:46 AM
that's cos it's feminine nonsense. Write about some hardcore jizzing n shit

JimGray
09/18/08, 07:29 AM
Haha, i liked it, but parts of it were awkward as fuck.

Case in point:
and head, take me home
alone along the boardwalk,
i've talked my way out of,
so many times before

Just doesn't feel right at all.

nkalldayyy
09/18/08, 12:17 PM
that's cos it's feminine nonsense. Write about some hardcore jizzing n shit
you love jiz.
you must jiz every day.

JJJ
09/18/08, 12:20 PM
I really enjoyed this, and I really like the title too. great job.

richie
09/18/08, 12:30 PM
like it!

emptycriminal
09/23/08, 05:38 PM
quite decent.
fan of the "billboard my blues" section.

beau blood rush
09/24/08, 07:36 AM
Haha, i liked it, but parts of it were awkward as fuck.

Case in point:
and head, take me home
alone along the boardwalk,
i've talked my way out of,
so many times before

Just doesn't feel right at all.

you're right jimmy, the flow is pooey as on paper
we'll see how it translates to song, and if it doesn't i'll reconstruct it

thanks everyone, i was actually thinking of dumping this song after thinking of some better themes for an interesting piano song.
so i'll either use this as a normal song, or keep it for its original role.
xx

beau blood rush
09/24/08, 07:37 AM
looking back on that post, there is so much "shitty" innuendo.
my bad.