"Memories of You"

[deathbatgurl]

This isn't one of my strongest songs, in my opinion, so any ideas would help!


Have you already forgot about me?
You're everything on my mind.
I'm still in love with you.
You cause so much pain.
You never loved me.
How could you hurt me like this?

I'm haunted forever,
by memories of you.

Do you remeber what we had?
You said you'd never let anything hurt me.
You said you wanted to make me feel good.
I care so much about you.
I don't want to let go of you.
I want to be there for you.
I want to help you.

I'm haunted forever,
by memories of youy.

You are so perfect.
I can never find someone like you again.
I want to be with you.
I just want you.
I want you to love me.
You're everything to me.
I'll give up everything for you.
I wish you could do that for me.

I'm haunted forever,
by memories of you.

Do you remeber me?
You told me i was beautiful.
You promised you loved me.
Everything you said was a lie.
Bu what about the good times we had?
You held me so tight.
I never wanted you to let go.
Why did you?

These are my memories of you.

[Idlewarrior]

Well, it's a bit better than the first one I read, but it still dies in cliche', i don't want to be rude, but I could barely read it, really try to picture it in such a way you almost cannot recognize what you're implying, but clearly imply the same meaning. Haha, I hope that makes sense xD