"Boxes Full of Dreams"

[BuriedAlive]

I'm still working with it. But I thought I should show you guys what I've been working with as of late.

Open your book to the last signed page (now open your eyes)
Fatally written yet lacking the depth (relive this pen)
Gathering those leftover clues (touching lonely mugshots)
And no longer can I comprehend (with deaf echoes)

So toss away those tormenting curses
wash 'em down with lazy melodramatic verses
We've been running at this for far too long it seems
Opportunities concealed in boxes full of dreams

(restless thoughts) Watch them plague my haunting mind
(weary cries) The fixation of life is drowning me
(hidden notes) Thinking I once had them all
(parade of lies) And no longer can I comprehend.

So toss away those tormenting curses
wash 'em down with lazy melodramatic verses
We've been running at this for far too long it seems
Opportunities concealed in boxes full of dreams

[deathgrin]

AWESOME! i like it :D

[BuriedAlive]

thank you much.

[Signals Corrupted]

i liked it too

[VeloriumCamper]

"Opportunities concealed in boxes full of dreams" - i like that line

overall really good...good job

[BuriedAlive]

thank you both.