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MCSmate
09/28/08, 09:47 PM
A street with a clock,
across from a street car stop with benches near the edge of the park behind,
holding the PSU sign.
Tourists wander and leave on their feet.
A man plays guitar, around the buildings surrounding us.
The street car comes.
I've already started heading back downtown,
from sitting on the ground...

Nothing important. Just wrote it down today from what was around me when I was at South Park Blocks (here in Portland) around Portland State University - PSU. Also, I don't really have a title for this so I put "Park Blocks" for now because that is where I was.

Nobodyhearsyou
09/30/08, 09:57 PM
ourists wan

What the fuck does that mean?

MCSmate
10/01/08, 12:48 AM
What the fuck does that mean?

I don't know where is says that in here.

I wrote " Tourists wander", maybe that's what you mean. I don't know. It's what I see posted here (and on the paper I wrote this on...)

bootsydan
10/01/08, 02:48 AM
I really like poetry like this. I loved it.

MCSmate
10/01/08, 10:25 AM
I really like poetry like this. I loved it.

Thanks.
It's good to just go and write like this. I think when I come up with an idea I start thinking to hard about it and get things like the songs I post on here...
It's good to (now) know what works, or something.
So thanks.