song in progress,

[beau blood rush]

I'm writing this to some sweet music one of my guitarist's wrote,
just a song about feeling at home at night where dreams seem to feel closer when your awake.
and ambition is stronger than ever.




Mr. Prozac (ALPHAholic and AM anonymous)

I'm home suite,
honeymoon in a glass room
jealousy leave me for him
press my head against a star,
and pawn shop heart
trade it up

i'm slipping through my village green,
blues
(blues)

ALPHAholic's and AM anonymous
kiss,
kiss
my good name goodbye

cardiac arrest my chest
you can call me Mr. Prozac
(call me Mr. Prozac)

no-no-nostalgia's hell on the exit
to your window ledge
and if i say so myself
loneliness don't get much better than this

i'm slipping through my village green,
blues
(blues)

ALPHAholic's and AM anonymous
kiss,
kiss
my good name goodbye

cardiac arrest my chest
you can call me Mr. Prozac
(call me Mr. Prozac)

whoa oh,
whoa oh, oh, oh, oh
whoa oh,
whoa oh, oh, oh, oh

whoa oh,
whoa oh, oh, oh, oh
whoa oh,
whoa oh, oh, oh, oh

(hayley from bleached academy) (http://www.myspace.com/bleachedacademy)

head,
take
me
home

head,
take
me
home

ALPHAholic's and AM anonymous
kiss,
kiss
my good name goodbye

cardiac arrest my chest
you can call me Mr. Prozac
(call me Mr. Prozac)

ALPHAholic's and AM anonymous
kiss,
kiss
my good name goodbye

[beau blood rush]

and for the record what do you guys think of this edit of a foto for the top of our page when we fix it up,
crit please
we played on the cliche "confetti and balloons party" photo that msot bands in our genre do by contrasting it with a real dark feel.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3230/2899006062_aa6bb7ce31.jpg
(http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3230/2899006062_8e536cfe17_o.jpg)

[AloneInTheDark]

it's very choppy and I don't see any coherent statements or anything there, just kind of words and descriptions thrown in a Conor Oberst way...just not as good.

The picture is cool though.

[beau blood rush]

thanks for the compliments on the picture man,

[avemery]

I liked the lines "I'm home suite / honeymoon in a glass room"

the word "suite" is a really nice way to allude to the phrase home 'sweet' home. I like the ambiguity between what what the listener will hear and what is actually on the page. It's nice man.

[avemery]

Oh and also "alphaholic" great word i dug that

www.myspace.com/statelman

[lew_1987]

Agree with AloneInTheDark here, this seems to be a collection of half decent one-liner statements that don't really fit together in any kind of coherent message. I'm sure that's not the case, but that's how it comes across. I also didn't like the chorus much.

Picture is cool though.

[beau blood rush]

avemery, you got exactly what i was going for with the opening line!

and hopefully the music saves the song for all of you guys who dont like it lyrically

[Nobodyhearsyou]

whoa oh,
whoa oh, oh, oh, oh
whoa oh,
whoa oh, oh, oh, oh

whoa oh,
whoa oh, oh, oh, oh
whoa oh,
whoa oh, oh, oh, oh





Wow this is the best part. I feel like I can relate the most to this part of the song. I dont know why any other band has never thought of those lyrics. THANK YOU!





suck

[lew_1987]

Wow this is the best part. I feel like I can relate the most to this part of the song. I dont know why any other band has never thought of those lyrics. THANK YOU!





suck

Fuck off.

[beau blood rush]

hmm should i feel bad about having the "whoa"'s in the song?
i know it's been done so much but it makes the song soo much catchier and helps bring in the last part of the song with good energy.

I hate it when bands use "whoa's" as the hook in songs, or even worse as part of the main statement the song is trying to make (example: FTSK)
But yeah i really enjoy them in other parts, so i'm going to leave it, it doesn't take anything away from the message i'm trying to make (nor does it add anything to it, ruin it)

cheers lew.

[Alex Djaferis]

it's very choppy and I don't see any coherent statements or anything there, just kind of words and descriptions thrown in a Conor Oberst way...just not as good.

The picture is cool though.

Agree with AloneInTheDark here, this seems to be a collection of half decent one-liner statements that don't really fit together in any kind of coherent message. I'm sure that's not the case, but that's how it comes across. I also didn't like the chorus much.

Picture is cool though.

i agree with those statements.

however i really cannot stand the title of the song. i'm not into those kind of names for tracks as it is. find them intensely pretentious, but thats me :-)

[beau blood rush]

yeah it's just working title atm, it might be changed yet.
last thing i want to come across as is pretentious!

this song didn't get such a great reaction, but it means a lot to me so i guess that's all that matters,
if it means a lot to me chances are someone else in the world will relate and understand it