Unreasonable
01/22/05, 03:45 AM
but i want feedback... actual feedback positive and negative... so eh here ya go.
Jumping into the shallow end
Pools of crimson overflowing
Breathing water swallowing air
So you thought that you were all-knowing
Did you foresee this beautiful tragedy
See the life portrait painted before your very eyes
Did you know how we would end up
Covered in our own filth and webs of deceit
Sinking to the bottom as only the hearts of lead can
Jumping into the shallow end
Pools of crimson overflowing
Breathing water swallowing air
So you thought that you were all-knowing
Did you foresee this beautiful tragedy
See the life portrait painted before your very eyes
Did you know how we would end up
Covered in our own filth and webs of deceit
Sinking to the bottom as only the hearts of lead can