A Boy Who Loved Windows

[mercutio7]

This is my band Mercutio's newest song, it will be on our EP due out early May



Narcissits on buisiness trips, clinging to their addictions
Living life in retrospect won't keep their children's eyes from blacking,
when second wives beat second chances, scissors cannot cut the tension, in this world money talks and I am one to keep my mouth shut

(chorus): It's safe to say I'm a mirror maze, a paper plain in a hurricane and her compass must be broken because I don't feel like her North anymore

Sarcastic Fists kissing sober lips,his wedding vows were just a deed to her hips,
second wives beat second chances, with every breath our death advances, this world was built on ignorance and I am one to ask questions

(chorus repeat)

(bridge): This is my Fever Frenzy, and won't you come along? I am Captain Car Crash and I'm here to take you home.

[BuriedAlive]

you know bud, I'm rarely impressed by anybody on here, but you always seem to. you have great flow with your writings. i have to say it's written well. the first verse (i guess is what we will call it) does lack the same flow as the rest, so i would say maybe work with that if you are looking to make any changed. other than that it's quite good.

[mercutio7]

thanks alot dude, I appreicate the feedback.