My Own Moon

[Mae Merle]

I dreamt once, that I
captured the moon in my hands;
Between slim fingers,
soft palms, and small demands.

But just as a dream
doesn't last all the night;
Some satellite sliped
back to reflect the light.

[emoXcomotion]

this was good. short and simple, making it very easy to read. keep it up.
<3

[punklet2101]

The first stanza is pretty great.