this game

[Pistol_Whip]

the keyboard, it shines crimson with the tears of my jizz
does it make me cry, fuck all of this shiz.
im sick of all this emo crud that brings the whole world down
and im tired of her cheating on her, turning my life brown

its time to recreate myself, to live another life
perhaps i should engage my wrist with the jealousy of my knife?
nah screw that, im stronger now, then ever i was before
but still i hate the fact that she's a fucking whore

i burn her with my thoughts and words, not with my hands or feet
i hate her with my cock and balls, as i furiously have a beat
time to tie off this song, its getting pretty lame
but i dont care, i dont mind, i know how to play this game

[Pistol_Whip]

BUMP would love some feedback to my poem? honest opinions welcome and accepted, just dont be rude or nasty =D

[JJJ]

ahahahahahahahahahahaha

[FScott]

good, reminds me of china3policy

[Pistol_Whip]

good, reminds me of china3policy

it was inspired by. not kidding, analysed the way he writes and tried to replicate it

[lew_1987]

it was inspired by. not kidding, analysed the way he writes and tried to replicate it

Pretty easy to replicate... yes?

[cris545]

thank you for adding another worthless song, really, we needed more.

[Pistol_Whip]

Pretty easy to replicate... yes?

no it was fairly hard. But if you think replicating a style is easy then you give it a try, I thought I did very well at writing in his style. Bet you can't do it, just cost you post thousands of comments on other peoples poems doesn't make you good at writing any.

[Pistol_Whip]

thank you for adding another worthless song, really, we needed more.

oh and if you want more then maybe I'll write some more shall I???? You guys can't take a joke, such SERIOUS people u bet you're all desperately lonely in real life, those of you who've made 10000+ posts....go outside and enjoy the sun guys!!!

[lew_1987]

no it was fairly hard. But if you think replicating a style is easy then you give it a try, I thought I did very well at writing in his style. Bet you can't do it, just cost you post thousands of comments on other peoples poems doesn't make you good at writing any.

Hahaha. I can't even be bothered responding to people like you anymore.

[lew_1987]

oh and if you want more then maybe I'll write some more shall I???? You guys can't take a joke, such SERIOUS people u bet you're all desperately lonely in real life, those of you who've made 10000+ posts....go outside and enjoy the sun guys!!!

Real original that... how long did it take you to come up with it?

[cris545]

oh and if you want more then maybe I'll write some more shall I???? You guys can't take a joke, such SERIOUS people u bet you're all desperately lonely in real life, those of you who've made 10000+ posts....go outside and enjoy the sun guys!!!

I have better things to do than to write bullshit songs, apparently you don't. Sorry.

[Tristan Needler]

This was 3chinapolicy. I told him next time it's permanent.

[lew_1987]

This was 3chinapolicy. I told him next time it's permanent.

Nice one.

I actually considered that this could be him, but I didn't think anyone could be that much of a dick.