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[Aqua]

Standing quietly, the water hits my face.
Reacting, I breathe in deeply, inhaling
thoughts full of passion and rage.
Numb to the world I tumble further down my
rabbit hole.
A silhouette of my life appears.
Blankly I stare at ridiculed life of
depression.
My lungs thrust outward, releasing this pain
and anguish.
My eyes bloodshot; but closed.
My legs collapsing as I inhale this
misconception of existence that I'm forced to
swallow.
Feeling lost and alone I force myself to
breathe.
Struggling to regain a false happiness, I
stand.
Tears fade from streams to smiles;
As I'm obligated to face this life once again.


umm.....yea.

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this was good. very angsty, i can somehwat relate. work on your structure and theres only the way up from there.
<3keep it up