Forget Me Knots

[xscarredstarsx]

Forget Me Knots
Everyday
Someone Leaves
Goes Away
And Forgets
And Time
Keeps Passing
By
Still, The Feeling
The Abandonment
Hides
In A Dark Place
Deep Down Inside
But
You Keep On
Again And Again
Lessons Learned
Are Blinded
By Hope
And The New
Soon Become Old
Over Again
Untill
There Is Nothing
Left
For Everyone
To Forget

written : 2-7-05

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[emoXcomotion]

i like how you structured this poem, it adds to the feel of the point you are trying to get across. expand your vocabulary and keep it up.
<3

[FinchBulldog2]

I liked it. Change a couple things around and could be really good.