i made this in one minute flat.. im sure you can tell but one minute can tell alot..

[mediocrgreenday]

have you ever stopped to think
what if fate is a fraud
the moments you live the choices you make, could they be yours or someone elses
is he as happy as you think, what if you dated his girl first
would their love find a way, would it be the same
do distractions work themselves out, in time everything will be the way it was supposed to be
if you think that way then thats fine, but what if your dreams are mine
that girl around your arms, what if shes meant for me, your best friend, or your worst enemy
time will tell you say
is this the way to live, we shall see

[emoXcomotion]

i liked most of this. the only thing i didnt like was your use of relationships as your example if fate was a fraud. i like the overall thought put into this about fate being a fraud, just not the part i mentioned before.
keep it up<3

[mediocrgreenday]

i liked most of this. the only thing i didnt like was your use of relationships as your example if fate was a fraud. i like the overall thought put into this about fate being a fraud, just not the part i mentioned before.
keep it up<3

yeah this was a vent, it really was done in about a minute. i was just curious to see what would flow off of my head. when i make poems in this thread i just click post new thread and let loose, i dont write them to begin with, which is why they are usually hit or miss i guess. Thanks for the input though, you kick ass.