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ClydeMcAllister
10/09/08, 10:16 AM
My first post in here. Thought I'd post some of my lyrics for one of my band's songs to see what people think of them. w00t.

Like Breaking Old Habits, But Less Smiling

You were right about me.
I'm just a bad shot at over compensating.
Nothing more, nothing less.
Standing on the tracks
So the next thing that hits me
Is just as hard as talking to you.

I'm not one for repeating myself,
So don't make a sound,
Don't make a sound

It's time to make amends,
So on my count,
Let's start feeling sorry for ourselves again.
Let's play it right this time.
Don't let them hear a sound.
Start feeling sorry for yourself
Cause I'm not.

And yet you lie again.
I know exactly what you want.
So predictable...
Is this what you had in mind?
Wipe that smile off your face
When your eyes begin to shine.
You're cutting out again.
Start feeling sorry, cause I'm not.

This is it, the last time.
Take one breath, close your eyes
And don't make a sound,
Don't make a sound.
And if you see me come around
Don't make a sound, don't make a sound
When your eyes begin to drown.

You were right about me,
I'm just not going to say I'm sorry.
You were right about me,
I'm not going to admit I'm wrong.
You were right about me,
Ignore How I'm supposed to feel.
If I'm even supposed to feel.

^^ About me, and what an absolute, unapolegetic, egotistic asshole I am. =]

Poe-tryGirl
10/09/08, 11:17 AM
That's really good. What kind of band is it?

ClydeMcAllister
10/09/08, 12:59 PM
That's really good. What kind of band is it?

Thank you.

It's pretty much a post hardcore band with a bit of popiness. Best way to put it is Thursday meets Paramore & Chiodos.

Here's another:

There's No Such Thing As A Polygonal Blood Diamond

Forget this letter when you leave.
I'm dying now to see just how we
Handle ourselves now.
With both eyes open we still don't see.
Obscured by the clouds, we walk down broken paths
Seperated by the sounds.
All we are now, are all the things
We used to need to stay the same.

And this is what you get
For all of your time spent
Another fragile broken mirror
And a side of yourself
You wish you didn't know,
Postpone the funeral
Just in time to save yourself

Stare the walls right in the face
Tell them how we used to be so close
And why you took your photos down
Would we rather have it any other way?

Just ahead I see you falling down.
Just remember I would take you
Wherever you wanted to go
Just ahead I see the different colors
Just remember I would take you
Wherever you wanted to go

And this is what you get
For all of your time spent
Another fragile broken mirror
Postpone the funeral

^^ Close to the same meaning as Like Breaking Old Habits I guess. Got the title from some preview article for Madden 08.

Poe-tryGirl
10/10/08, 08:29 AM
Ha! I love the song titles. I like this one too. It reminds me a bit of Senses Fail though (mirrors!). Anyway, I like the whole Thursday-Paramore-Chidos thing. Awesome! What's the band called?

ClydeMcAllister
10/10/08, 05:42 PM
Ha! I love the song titles. I like this one too. It reminds me a bit of Senses Fail though (mirrors!). Anyway, I like the whole Thursday-Paramore-Chidos thing. Awesome! What's the band called?

Point Barrow. It's the name of the northernmost part of North America. We chose it basically to correlate to the Alaska/Nautical themes in the artowrk.

Also, MOAR:

Everything You've Ever Wanted/God's In His Heaven. All's Right With The World.

I saw your hometown on the news,
It's safe to say you won't be coming home anytime soon.
It came and swallowed up your life,
It's safe to say I don't belong there anyway.
I'm not who you thought I would be,
Said our goodbyes in the summer,

(Chorus)
You're not who I thought you would be
Said our goodbyes in the summer
Said our goodbyes in the summer
You gave me all you had to give
When I should have meant
Everything I said

But what do you have left?
The city's just gone dead
It's not over until I say it's over
And it's not over yet
The problem with letting go
Is holding on in the first place
It's not over until I say it's over
And it's not over yet

(Chorus)
Your not who I thought you would be
Said our goodbyes in the summer
Said our goodbyes in the summer
You gave me all you had to give
When I should have meant
Everything I said

It came and swallowed up your life


^^ About an ex-girlfriend who got totally and completely fucked by Hurricane Katrina.

No, It's Not Alright

Teaching right from wrong
In umfamiliar ways
You let their faith slip
Right through your hands
You just gave them names
Thought it was enough
There you go, out the door.

(Chorus)
It's too late to turn back now.
It's too late to pretend you're sorry.
You're so dissapointing.

You've seen better days
Now they're all the same
No thanks to all of them
The ones you love
The one's who've forgiven
All the shit you've done

(Chorus)
It's too late to turn back now.
It's too late to pretend you're sorry.
You're so dissapointing.

^^ About another ex's mom, who is a professional crackhead. This one needs a bit of work.

One more...

The Last Time I Saw Paris

I never really wanted to feel,
But You felt me.
I never really wanted to hear,
But you told me.
I never really wanted to see,
But you've shown me everything.
Said you wanted to be alone,
Well you're alone now,
You're alone now.

(Chorus)
Where this track leads, I'm not sure.
Where this train stops, I don't know.
But there's one thing I know for sure
It's I don't love you anymore
Take your shots, I don't mind.
I've lost your touch, your insight.
Where do you go when there's just
Nothing left to feel?

This is me. I'm on fire.
Is this not what you desire?
Oxygen escapes my lungs
And I run but I just can't see
If I'm going in the right direction

(Chorus)
Where this track leads, I'm not sure.
Where this train stops, I don't know.
But there's one thing I know for sure
It's I don't love you anymore
Take your shots, I don't mind.
I've lost your touch, your insight
Where do you go when there's just
Nothing left to feel?

I've told you now, once or twice.
You'd better take my advice.
Running away when there's
Nothing left to feel
I don't think you'll make it home
And if you do you're, all alone
Where will you go when there's
Nothing left to feel?

^^ Nothing special, just a breakup song.

Poe-tryGirl
10/13/08, 08:31 AM
Very cool name. Geography is lovely. I really like "The Last Time I saw Paris." I have a poem similar to this, only it has a lot more gor in it. But the lyrics of all of them are all pretty cool. I'd kill to hear it. Are there any girls in the band or is it just boys? The one about hurricaine Katrina is really good too-"swallowed up"-nice metaphor. I'd applaude only you can't hear me.

ClydeMcAllister
10/13/08, 05:26 PM
Very cool name. Geography is lovely. I really like "The Last Time I saw Paris." I have a poem similar to this, only it has a lot more gor in it. But the lyrics of all of them are all pretty cool. I'd kill to hear it. Are there any girls in the band or is it just boys? The one about hurricaine Katrina is really good too-"swallowed up"-nice metaphor. I'd applaude only you can't hear me.

Haha, thank you for the kind words.

It's an all dude band, though I wouldn't mind getting a girl in to do keys/synth stuff as well as some singing. Our keyboard player just left and trying to compensate for it has been a bitch, and I've always wondered what it'd be like to have some female vocals in these songs.

Poe-tryGirl
10/21/08, 08:52 AM
Haha, thank you for the kind words.

It's an all dude band, though I wouldn't mind getting a girl in to do keys/synth stuff as well as some singing. Our keyboard player just left and trying to compensate for it has been a bitch, and I've always wondered what it'd be like to have some female vocals in these songs.

That's cool. You totally wouldn't want to hear me though. But seriously the song lyrics are way cool. I wounder why it is that I have like only a few bands in my Zune that have girls in them-Paramore, Meg and Dia, t.A.T.u., I think that's all NO! MSI! AHH! Sorry-off topic, I know. But you guys don't have any videos of the band playing anywhere? I'd like to listen. Is there any screaming?