Hoyer Lift My Head (Outta The Gutter).

[beau blood rush]

*unfinished song loosely based on imagining how someone i know feels about loosing someone very important to her, kind of a tribute to the person who's passed.





remember when we took our chances,
on shots in the hospital,
with whatever we could get our hands on?

and with white coats spewin' blue notes from troubled throats,
i knew a diary couldn't keep this down
so i wrote it out on the patient charts
of lover's charmed by a bouquet of a

standing ovation,
no, no, no, no, no, no chaser's

what an applause.
you lived a life worth living for
sleep well
while this sleepless town
will never let me live you..

what an applause.
you lived a life worth living for
sleep well
while this sleepless town
will never let me live you down

three cheers for third stories
and the hope yr tear catcher eyes catch me
hoyer lift my head off the sidewalk
and here's to you comin' back:

"someone to write home about"

what an applause.
you lived a life worth living for
sleep well
while this sleepless town
will never let me live you..

what an applause.
you lived a life worth living for
sleep well
while this sleepless town
will never let me live you down

[nkalldayyy]

i like how you compared her life to a play or a concert with "applause" and "standing ovation". that's an interesting way to look at it.

i really liked the line "and with white coats spewin' blue notes from troubled throats," too, i don't know why.

[beau blood rush]

thanks, yeh i wrote the song around that line
and yeh i think it's the best way to look at somoene passing

[nkalldayyy]

thanks, yeh i wrote the song around that line
and yeh i think it's the best way to look at somoene passing
great work, really. i bet it sounds amazing.

[beau blood rush]

thank you :]
i'll post here as soon as it's done
xx

[lew_1987]

I liked this; it's a fitting tribute without being overly cheesy. The only line that I didn't like was the 'tear catcher' line, but other than that I can't find many problems with it.

[beau blood rush]

thanks lew, i'll have a work on the second verse i think