Ode To a Hypothetical Summer Storm

[kathywithak]

Observation:
when people wish to flatter, they
compliment eyes, lips; "there's
just something about you"
(I can't get enough of).
but I still walk down the hallway, a
humming cliché, knowing I
could write a best-selling novel about
your neck and hands and gait.

obsessed? not much.
fallen over your massive shoes?
more than likely

[somerset]

The poem speaks. its short and sweet.

[eight]

that was really nice and awesome. i like how you get the point across quickly.. i always take close to a full page to finish my ideas. short and sweet indeed.

[kathywithak]

thank you both a bunch for commenting...the forum's been dying for months now.

[punkpixie]

I loved it, I really dig all your work though. It always seems to say what it wants to say, in just the right amount of words..