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lovelikearose
10/16/08, 09:14 AM
This is a poem I wrote on August 7th, 2008.

This poem is sort of about my feelings about moving. I moved to a new state in July, and I was sort of having a rough time in the beginning, I think I was just scared though because the first time I ever moved I was really upset about it for about 4 years, and I tried to hide it, but in like August, I was giving my mom all this attitude about the school I go to now because of its stupid dress code, but it's okay now. I'm not in the mood to be too upset, and it's not worth being upset over. Also, I wrote this over how I was worried about making friends...because naturally it takes me a long time to make "real" friends.

Please tell me what you think.


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The Veil


A sea of souls,

A hill of hearts,

All with similar or very different goals.



This is a new sea,

To me,

A hill I've only begun to climb.



Seeing all these unfamiliar creatures and things,

Is not easy,

That's why,

Leaving remains hated...



I used to hide,

Behind a veil of smiles and lies,

But slowly it fades away,

Even though it always was,

s h e e r. . .

Poe-tryGirl
10/16/08, 01:06 PM
This is a poem I wrote on August 7th, 2008.

This poem is sort of about my feelings about moving. I moved to a new state in July, and I was sort of having a rough time in the beginning, I think I was just scared though because the first time I ever moved I was really upset about it for about 4 years, and I tried to hide it, but in like August, I was giving my mom all this attitude about the school I go to now because of its stupid dress code, but it's okay now. I'm not in the mood to be too upset, and it's not worth being upset over. Also, I wrote this over how I was worried about making friends...because naturally it takes me a long time to make "real" friends.

Please tell me what you think.


www.quarterlife.com/lovelikearose (http://www.quarterlife.com/lovelikearose)



The Veil


A sea of souls,

A hill of hearts,

All with similar or very different goals.



This is a new sea,

To me,

A hill I've only begun to climb.



Seeing all these unfamiliar creatures and things,

Is not easy,

That's why,

Leaving remains hated...



I used to hide,

Behind a veil of smiles and lies,

But slowly it fades away,

Even though it always was,

s h e e r. . .


It's good. Really good. I have a poem entitled "Paperback Veil." You should read it. It's in my blogs.