_NotDeadYet_
10/17/08, 02:16 PM
Okay, Okay... Well first off, i hope you don't steal this!! but then again, you might not. I hope this is good... okay? i'm still kind of an amuture(?) lyricsisssssss.... so yeah... for right now, i just wanna know if it's good or not and how can i improve... thanks!! and beeeeeee strickkkkkkkk. if you just say "oh its cool" or "you suck" that doesn't really help. i need improvement! please! thanks... oh and to let you know, i was really really really upset and mad at a friend so yeah.... and he STILL treats our lives like crap. but... whatever.... i guess and the name at the end was this old band name my friend and i was thinking of... we don't have one in the mean time... but hey. i'll put it anyway. :]
Oh, baby you're treating me bad
Oh, You're treating me real bad
Oh, baby,baby, baby.... (scream)
OH MY GOD STOP TREATING MY LIFE LIKE CRAP! OH! (ah?)
You're a fucking LIAR with the disguise of a "friend"
Talking shit behind out backs
If looks can kill, you want us dead
But honey, I could say the same for you.
I hope that so called heart of your's breaks
That is, if you could love
Thank you for the venom
Thanks a lot for a vile life!
Pre Chorus thing...:
And if i can remember...
YOU'RE NOT LIKE THIS! (screamo)
Chorus:
Go ahead and turn your back
You're still someone I don't know
You don't give a DAMN
And I won't give a SHIT
But, OH MY GOD STOP TREATING MY LIFE LIKE CRAP!!!
You've said all you want and it hurts
Hurts like the blade that doesn't scream at your face
Stop being a fucking little bastard
AND REALIZE WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME -
DONE TO US!!!
Chorus:
Go ahead and turn your back
You're still someone I don't know
You don't give a DAMN
And I won't give a SHIT
But, OH MY GOD STOP TREATING MY LIFE LIKE CRAP!!! (2x, screamo)
[pause]
YA HEAR ME?!?!
ugh.
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Oh, baby you're treating me bad
Oh, You're treating me real bad
Oh, baby,baby, baby.... (scream)
OH MY GOD STOP TREATING MY LIFE LIKE CRAP! OH! (ah?)
You're a fucking LIAR with the disguise of a "friend"
Talking shit behind out backs
If looks can kill, you want us dead
But honey, I could say the same for you.
I hope that so called heart of your's breaks
That is, if you could love
Thank you for the venom
Thanks a lot for a vile life!
Pre Chorus thing...:
And if i can remember...
YOU'RE NOT LIKE THIS! (screamo)
Chorus:
Go ahead and turn your back
You're still someone I don't know
You don't give a DAMN
And I won't give a SHIT
But, OH MY GOD STOP TREATING MY LIFE LIKE CRAP!!!
You've said all you want and it hurts
Hurts like the blade that doesn't scream at your face
Stop being a fucking little bastard
AND REALIZE WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME -
DONE TO US!!!
Chorus:
Go ahead and turn your back
You're still someone I don't know
You don't give a DAMN
And I won't give a SHIT
But, OH MY GOD STOP TREATING MY LIFE LIKE CRAP!!! (2x, screamo)
[pause]
YA HEAR ME?!?!
ugh.
© SafetyPin Seduction