You Be The (Noun), I'll Be The (Co-Existing Noun)

[Chiefgango]

Verse 1

Go on chase
Where each bottle leads
A gospel choir couldn't
Heal the hand that it feeds
A lifeless body
Signals any given chance
To remould the iron
Of our first lovers glance

Pre-Chorus

All this time you were
An honest mistake
And all this time you were
Hiding my hiding place

Chorus

Lately ive been losing track
Of our untold, twisted tale
But our minds could co-collapse
As honesty de-rails

Verse 2

Broken bones
Lay scattered on the floor
As you justify the means
By screaming out for more
An underlying
Message subliminaly told
Between pages of our desire
In a book whose jokes are getting old


Chorus

Lately ive been losing track
Of our untold, twisted tale
But our minds could co-collapse
As honesty de-rails

Verse3/Bridge

A treasure trove
We locked the key inside
Our memories are forgotten
From time we couldn't bide

Chorus

Lately ive been losing track
Of our untold, twisted tale
But our minds could co-collapse
As honesty de-rails

[Chiefgango]

anyone got an opinion?

[npmshah]

I'm impressed
though i'd have to hear it with music to see how good it could be
you definetely have a knack for lyrcs

[Chiefgango]

I'm impressed
though i'd have to hear it with music to see how good it could be
you definetely have a knack for lyrcs

thanks for the kind words :)

you can hear a recorded version at www.myspace.com/theopeninterview (http://www.myspace.com/theopeninterview) although im not entirely happy with the vocals i think it gives you a rough idea :)