My latest failure..

[BuriedAlive]

Whelp, My latest failure...

I forget to look back, while you begin drive away
the sound of your voice, well, it leaves me disarrayed
my arm around your neck, and my heart on her sleeve
I'm losing life on this sober new year's eve.

Well, she holds my heart at the end of her string
it's convienently threaded to the end of her sleeve
she watches it swing with a fabricated laugh
I dreamt away our forgetable past

I'm ready to watch you become a trend
You're holding on just to watch me bend
whisper softy to live this down
you're still complaining
while I'm tearing through the town

[Alex Djaferis]

it flows real well chris. its got a really good rythm when i read it. I liked it.

[BuriedAlive]

it flows real well chris. its got a really good rythm when i read it. I liked it.
thanks bro. i haven't really given this one a chance. i'm just now starting to work with it again.

[x heart]

i liked it a lot. it's better than anything i could write.. good job.

[selftitled85]

How's this version?

I forget to look back, while you begin drive away
the sound of your voice, well, it leaves me disarrayed
my arm around your neck, and my heart on her sleeve
I'm losing life on this sober new year's eve.

Well, she holds my heart at the end of her string
it's convienently threaded to the end of her sleeve
she watches it swing with a fabricated laugh
I dreamt away our forgetable past

I'm ready to watch you become a trend
You're holding on just to watch me bend
whisper softy to live this down
you're still complaining
while I'm tearing through the town


damn chris i really like your lyrics. it flows really well. good job.

[BuriedAlive]

damn chris i really like your lyrics. it flows really well. good job.
Thanks man, sometime during my spring break I should have up this song. Though, without the second guitar (me) since I don't have one at the moment.

[BuriedAlive]

well gosh darn.