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Lythropod
10/28/08, 01:31 PM
I’m drowning in the tears that you have shed for me,
I don’t want to make you cry no more,
I’m choking on the words that you have said to me,
I don’t want your deceit anymore,


My blood lies stagnant in my veins,
My heart won’t beat to pump it,
Round my body, Aches, I take in air,
But feel no better just despair, and tainted trust,
My new addiction is my bloodlust,


I’m coughing up the blood that I have spilt for you,
I don’t know if these wounds will ever heal,
I’m swimming in the lies that you have poured on me,
I don’t know if I can stay afloat.


My blood lies stagnant in my veins,
My heart won’t beat to pump it,
Round my body, Aches, I take in air,
But feel no better just despair, and tainted trust,
My new addiction is my bloodlust,


I bled ‘til I stopped, now I can’t bleed no more,
But I wish that I could cos I can’t find a cure,
For bloodlust.


I bled ‘til I stopped, now I can’t bleed no more,
But I wish that I could cos I can’t find a cure,
For bloodlust.

fishingthe_sky
10/28/08, 07:24 PM
Honestly, this is filled cliches and overused imagery. The last part seems like it was lifted straight from an Alk 3 song - circa "Good Mourning"