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whitetrashrap
10/29/08, 03:32 PM
Song I made, it is a subliminal song so YOU guess what you think it is about. =P
Sinister Design

[intro]
when I'm sleeping...
all i see is...
bloody faces...
under my control.

[verse1]
crimson raining from the sky
people kneeling at my feet
this is my vision
how the world should be
hes burning in the flames
i watch him as he screams
flesh melting from thy face
i watch him die in sweet grace

[bridge]
this world will be mine
it's all part of my
sinister design

[chorus]
im the puppeteer, you are my puppet
you are my doll, i am the master
look at that picture, now follow the scripture
you shall be rewarded if u paint a pretty picture

[verse 2]
i commit human transmogrify
your under the influence of me
you shall do as i say
come forth i summon thee!
horned devil beasts run free
killing everything in sight
for sick fucked up fun
this reign of terrors just begun!

[bridge]

[chorus]

[bridge #2]
kill...
you violently
kill...
you constantly
you...
cant hide from me
your essence of being is fading!

[chorus #2]
i was the puppeteer, you were my puppet
you were my doll, i was the master
you looked at that picture, you followd the scripture
you are now rewarded, you painted my sinister picture

[outro]
this world is now mine
it was all part of my
Sinister Design

Johnith
10/29/08, 03:41 PM
I just don't like the shortness of the chorus and verse

The song has a good message yet it just doesn't seem to completely get it through

fishingthe_sky
10/29/08, 06:40 PM
I think you misunderstand what subliminal means...

whitetrashrap
10/29/08, 06:45 PM
Probably, I'm not exactly the "brightest cookie in the box" sometimes. ha. To me, anyways, the "average" person would maybe not guess this was talking about religion. But then again, what do I know :-)

bluecrunchy
10/29/08, 06:50 PM
bad.

fishingthe_sky
10/29/08, 07:06 PM
Probably, I'm not exactly the "brightest cookie in the box" sometimes. ha. To me, anyways, the "average" person would maybe not guess this was talking about religion. But then again, what do I know :-)
I think the flames and devil imagery make it pretty... obvious

loganmmm
10/29/08, 07:14 PM
Metal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!