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[QuietMisfortune]

I can't begin to describethe feelings I have for you.When you look deep into my eyes,what it makes me do...My lips begin to tremble,my heart begins to ache.My knees go weak and shaky,my hands begin to quake.I've never really expressed myself, my feelings I keep in a jar.But through this poem I'll tell youwhat they really are.I feel your presence when you're near,and for your touch my body cries.But when you smile and walk away-my heart, my soul... it dies.You're aware, I'm sure you knowof my everlasting devotion.To you it's a game, you play hard-to-get,you're toying with my emotion.In my dreams, we dance on clouds,until the mornings dew.When will you come to realizethat my heart belongs to you?You're my only fantasythe darkest hour of the night.I gaze at you, I kiss your cheek,draw you close and hold you tight.I open my eyes, looking for youat the breaking of the dawn.But your place, for now, is in my dreamsand, once again, you're gone.I'd give myself to the Devilif I could have one kiss from youTo capture that heavenly momentI don't know what I'd do.I need your love and compassionI need you by my side.Once I thought I couldn't have you,so I just sat down and cried.If I can't have your love just yetI'll wait till the end of time.To me the wait is worth itto be able to call you mine.Tucked in the shadows of your lifeis a place I do not fear,because if I'm not with you,I'll be forever near.As you can see

[apoemtothedead]

Ah the unknown usefulness of paragraphs.

[velouriumCAMPER]

Ah the unknown usefulness of paragraphs.

Ignorance is bliss.

[EnderDove]

Ah the unknown usefulness of paragraphs.
Not to mention spacing between puncuation.

About the poem though...um....please dont use a Thrice icon on something like this, thank you.

[paperheart]

far mean

[EnderDove]

far mean
Just wait to see what they will do to you.

[apoemtothedead]

far mean

please don't play with me.

[AmazingEnvy420]

:dweeba48: rock on

[PhoebeISmyLover]

hmmm it was ok imo, but your emo right?? so why not be like "OMG I HATE YOU BITCH!" hahahhaa

[punkpixie]

hmmm it was ok imo, but your emo right?? so why not be like "OMG I HATE YOU BITCH!" hahahhaa

Don't even get me started on you.....

[allelish]

hmmm it was ok imo, but your emo right?? so why not be like "OMG I HATE YOU BITCH!" hahahhaa
Cease!

[apoemtothedead]

hmmm it was ok imo, but your emo right?? so why not be like "OMG I HATE YOU BITCH!" hahahhaa

I'm pretty sure emo kids would say that as "Damn ho, I gon smack you upside da head if youz don't letz mi get ya ba-dunk-a-dunk."

[paperheart]

tards.people your not hot shit ,those who think since they have amazing amounts of posts that they are above others who have just begun.u have no idea about our background.so get fucked

[BlueEyedLetdown]

well a side form the lack of spacing and all the gramatical stuff...it was ok...i mean it just seems out of place, no real darkness to it, no real edge, i will give you that you used the devil once...i don't know, it was really sweet, a bit sad tho b/c it's sounds like your obsessed!! I mean gezz man, there are other girls out there!!

[apoemtothedead]

tards.people your not hot shit ,those who think since they have amazing amounts of posts that they are above others who have just begun.u have no idea about our background.so get fucked

s my d

[paperheart]

i believe the phrase is 'suck my dick'

[apoemtothedead]

i believe the phrase is 'suck my dick'

...and I'm still waiting.

[FinchBulldog2]

Punctualize yoself mothafucka