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MCSmate
11/03/08, 11:10 PM
You hold this over me
It's taken me awhile to see
That words can mean everything
And all but the same
I haven't seen another way, a reason to play this game
But in time I'll break these words away

Finally I can hang these high
The ending of these words you despise
Where is it taking you now?
Finally I can hang these high
The ending of these words...

You are lost overhead
And I'm underneath this lonely mess
A paper or two, of the words surrounding you
Never changing a thing
Where do the best of them go
When they've broken away - is it all the same?

Finally I can hang these high
The ending of these words you despise
Where is it taking you now?
Finally I can hang these high
The ending of these words...

I'll break the words away
I'll break these words away
I'll break these words away
I'll break these words away

Finally I can hang these high
The ending of these words you despise
Where is it taking you now?
Finally I can hang these high
The ending of these words...


Note: Very new, unedited, written somewhat quickly. Also the title is tentative until I come up with something better or that I just like more. Your suggestions are welcome as well.

xmy.only.exitx
11/04/08, 02:07 AM
i thought it was very mediocre. nothing stood out.