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BlueEyedLetdown
04/04/05, 07:50 PM
I can feel myself sinking back agian,
Back to the days i hurt so bad
And needed to feel the pain to know i was alive.
The cool blade,
It hurts so good
Use the lighter
Set myself on fire
Make it hurt so good
Baby, I wanna make it hurt so good

I wanna cut the evil outta me,
I wanna feel my insides scream.
Baby, I just wanna make it hurt so good

Can you hear me screaming?
I'm dieing inside
All I wanna do is cut my pride.
I'm slowly dieing on the inside.
Baby, I just wanna make it hurt
I wanna make it hurt so good.

I got a knife to my throat
A gun to my head,
Give me one reason
Give me one good reason to live.

I've got plastic wings
And a plastic smile
I'm dieing.
Baby, can you feel me?
I'm dieing inside.

The walls are closeing in.
The final scenes about to begin.
Hear the aploize?
Are you happy now?
My heart is broken,
And your the cause.
Now for my curtin call,
I'll take my final bow
Cuz baby, this hurt...
It doesn't feel so good.
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Comments are apperciated and any advice about my writing...oh, and as a side note I'm not sucidal like this poem makes me seem, i write to get things out...and I write what I feel, and most of what I write is a bit dark.

Andy
04/05/05, 06:44 AM
That hurt.

A tad too depressing for my taste.

punkpixie
04/10/05, 11:14 AM
hahaha, and you said mine was bad!

FinchBulldog2
04/10/05, 06:56 PM
hahaha, and you said mine was bad!
she's heating up.

mprestop
04/24/05, 01:49 PM
i particularly like the last part and the theatrical imagery...