Self written lyrics

[Mxbaby511]

Working on a song and want opinions??
Write it here kiddo.

[llwilliamsll]

Share Your Lyrics and Poems forum is that way -----> http://absolutepunk.net/forumdisplay.php?f=34

[lilRIPsta]

Lolz Noobzorz

[lfdfforever]

this self absorption may seem varied
but it comes in one convenient portion
and to whom it may concern
i'll leave my chatting ideas here
so their mislead plans will have a place to burn
and to who might understand
this dignity lays scattered fitting in
with every over looked grain of sand

hehehehe

[TheOtherAndrew]

its a political punk song


1 2 3 4

<bass starts>
1 2 1234

the government..........
is getting on my nerves!
the punishment..........
of all the inocent....

<pause, then bass drum then snare real fast>

<guitar solo>

<this is the part where the crowd sings along>

Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....

<back to fast verse>

now where did i leave off?
how did i see this
and i didnt realize,
your full of SHIT!



Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....




any comments? i have been making it for about 3 hours and i made the guitar solos and bass parts

[llwilliamsll]

its a political punk song


1 2 3 4

<bass starts>
1 2 1234

the government..........
is getting on my nerves!
the punishment..........
of all the inocent....

<pause, then bass drum then snare real fast>

<guitar solo>

<this is the part where the crowd sings along>

Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....

<back to fast verse>

now where did i leave off?
how did i see this
and i didnt realize,
your full of SHIT!



Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....




any comments? i have been making it for about 3 hours and i made the guitar solos and bass parts
HAHAHAHA
x
That is so good I'm pretty sure you plagiarized.
definitely remember that thread

[lfdfforever]

its a political punk song


1 2 3 4

<bass starts>
1 2 1234

the government..........
is getting on my nerves!
the punishment..........
of all the inocent....

<pause, then bass drum then snare real fast>

<guitar solo>

<this is the part where the crowd sings along>

Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....

<back to fast verse>

now where did i leave off?
how did i see this
and i didnt realize,
your full of SHIT!



Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....




any comments? i have been making it for about 3 hours and i made the guitar solos and bass parts this is how millions of dead cops write their songs.

[TBS0116]

Worst ex and best friends

I'm thinking back to the day that we first met
Covered from our head, to our toes in regret
You couldn't begin to conceive the hatred
that has been building since you left
Do you remember, the day that our lips first grazed
Talk about cliche, awful textbook mistake
To change those decisions
Looking back i'd give anything

(Do you know what you did to me? Do you have a clue how bad it hurts!)
(Do you know what you did to me?) Do you have a guess at what its worth?

I held my breath for you, i wish you'd hold yours for me too
I'm not talking about resting your eyes or falling asleep
(Your just like me but you did this twice!)
(Save me the details!)
I'm not the one who regrets every night
I, may be sleepless, but at least i lye alone
I, may be sleepless, but at least i lye alone

I was so consumed with shooting sunshine in my head
I may have lost a touch of my innocents
Terrible memories become nightmares
And its not to my surprise that i can't forget
Do you remember, the way you said my name
I forgot, I'm sure you say his just the same
When you find your self crying in corners
You will be the only one to blame

(Do you know what you're doing to me? I hate regret like second chances!)
(Do you know what you're doing to me?) You're nothing but a second glance kid

I held my breath for you, i wish you'd hold yours for me too
I'm not talking about resting your eyes or falling asleep
(Your just like me but you did this twice!)
(Save me the details!)
I'm not the one who regrets every night
I, may be sleepless, but at least i lye alone
I, may be sleepless, but at least i lye alone

And this is my promise never to fall in love
And this is my promise to never fall in love
And this is my promise never to fall in love
And this is my promise to never fall in love

And you're next victim?
(Fuck him, Fuck him!)
I could care less about him anyway
You're awful decisions
(Fuck them, Fuck them!)
You never mattered anyway

I held my breath for you, i wish you'd hold yours for me too
(Hold your breath, don't say a word!)
You're just like me but you did this twice
(Your explanation, serves me no purpose!)

[CellarGhosts]

its a political punk song


1 2 3 4

<bass starts>
1 2 1234

the government..........
is getting on my nerves!
the punishment..........
of all the inocent....

<pause, then bass drum then snare real fast>

<guitar solo>

<this is the part where the crowd sings along>

Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....

<back to fast verse>

now where did i leave off?
how did i see this
and i didnt realize,
your full of SHIT!



Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....




any comments? i have been making it for about 3 hours and i made the guitar solos and bass parts
Still the best thing ever posted.

[thespearkid]

its a political punk song


1 2 3 4

<bass starts>
1 2 1234

the government..........
is getting on my nerves!
the punishment..........
of all the inocent....

<pause, then bass drum then snare real fast>

<guitar solo>

<this is the part where the crowd sings along>

Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....

<back to fast verse>

now where did i leave off?
how did i see this
and i didnt realize,
your full of SHIT!



Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....




any comments? i have been making it for about 3 hours and i made the guitar solos and bass parts
Every time this is copy-pasted, it makes my day.

[CellarGhosts]

I like how they aren't any lyrics at the part where the crowd is supposed to "sing along".

Edit - This is now the official "It's a political punk song" thread.

[thespearkid]

They're supposed to say Go! Guitar fill!

[TheOtherAndrew]

They're supposed to say Go! Guitar fill!
Bob Dylan has nothing on this guy.
Still the best thing ever posted.
Agreed. 100%. That thread should be added to the Library of Congress.

[CellarGhosts]

Bob Dylan has nothing on this guy.

Agreed. 100%. That thread should be added to the Library of Congress.
Haha, yes. Like I said, this is now the official "Its a political punk song" thread.

[TheOtherAndrew]

tyler the robot 4 prezident

[CellarGhosts]

They're supposed to say Go! Guitar fill!
Hahah, oh, right. My mistake.

tyler the robot 4 prezident
Was that his username? I honestly forget. Still, backed.

[thespearkid]

Bob Dylan has nothing on this guy.

Agreed. 100%. That thread should be added to the Library of Congress.
True. If only Dylan would've added a pause and then bass real fast to Desolation Row, he could've had as much depth and meaning as "It's a Political Punk Song".

[hermosotrozo]

its a political punk song


1 2 3 4

<bass starts>
1 2 1234

the government..........
is getting on my nerves!
the punishment..........
of all the inocent....

<pause, then bass drum then snare real fast>

<guitar solo>

<this is the part where the crowd sings along>

Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....

<back to fast verse>

now where did i leave off?
how did i see this
and i didnt realize,
your full of SHIT!



Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....




any comments? i have been making it for about 3 hours and i made the guitar solos and bass parts

Political punk??? ha ha thats a genre...never heard of it before....! i would reccommend you to post it on this lyrics (http://www.smartlyrics.com) site.

[Mxbaby511]

Wow
This is so old.
I totally fogot about this thread lol