B.k.g

[beau blood rush]

*I'm yet to finish the chorus and the bridge, and i'll fix up the verse's.
but thought I'd post this before i go to bed to see what you guys like and dislike.
night!


B.K.G

just one floor from a let down, hoping that your a hit enough to break my fall.
if only for the fame, his dearest catch of the da-da-da-da-da-da-day, late.
well I've been told, "you make this town feel old,"
the worst part's I already know,
I'm just a waistcoat with a peachy grin gathering dust on your bedroom floor.

(cause tonight's an open pore that just won't close.)

and you're not quite shallow, then again
you don't run quite as wet as the ink from this pen

good luck kid, good luck kid
you're gonna need it (you're gonna need it)
hail the heart-breaker's
by trade, she's a preacher but she's not preaching faith

(she preachers love)

"made in misery".
but don't, don't ship me off,
like this crate could really keep me in.
with two-step tongues creeping down lungs, flooding them. uh, uh, uh
we made love, wrong

with dusk-rings worn around dawn-eyes,
lies cover up the make-up, covering the lie
you're still picture perfect,
only not quite the kind I'd hang bed-side


good luck kid, good luck kid
you're gonna need it (you're gonna need it)
hail the heart-breaker's
by trade, she's a preacher but she's not preaching faith

(she preachers love)


and i'd wish i could hate the way you make me feel, if only you weren't the star i'd wish upon


good luck kid, good luck kid
you're gonna need it (you're gonna need it)
hail the heart-breaker's
by trade, she's a preacher but she's not preaching faith

(she preachers love)

[beau blood rush]

updated.

[Judge'sDaughter]

eehn... so cliche.

[White]

When you get called cliché by a 15 year old girl, you're doing it wrong.

No offense to you, above me.

[nkalldayyy]

i like it, i mean for poetry it might be cliche but for lyrics i think it's pretty good.

"and you're not quite shallow, then again
you don't run quite as wet as the ink from this pen"

that's my favorite line. i think this would work really well as a song. i like the studdering, too.

: )

[beau blood rush]

Yeah, i originally thought i must be doing it wrong if a 15 year old girl called this cliche
then i checked out her music tastes, and it's no wonder this style would go right over her head,
I in no way write songs for those music tastes.

It's far more in Nicole's tastes which is probably why she likes it more.

As for the subject matter, yeah it's cliche, but i don't think the lines are.

I'm not going to let musical history's tendency to write songs about love stop me from having my take on it.
I mean you'd have to be pretty pretentious to expect everyone to stop writing songs about love just because It's been done so many times before.

Anyway, with a bit of tweaking this might make it to our debut EP.

And the subject matter at the moment (one song being about sleeplessness due to determination. and one other song about standing up for yourself) I really feel like i'd like one everyone can relate to, that being anger and love for the opposite sex, should be on the EP.

[nkalldayyy]

Yeah, i originally thought i must be doing it wrong if a 15 year old girl called this cliche
then i checked out her music tastes, and it's no wonder this style would go right over her head,
I in no way write songs for those music tastes.

It's far more in Nicole's tastes which is probably why she likes it more.

As for the subject matter, yeah it's cliche, but i don't think the lines are.

I'm not going to let musical history's tendency to write songs about love stop me from having my take on it.
I mean you'd have to be pretty pretentious to expect everyone to stop writing songs about love just because It's been done so many times before.

Anyway, with a bit of tweaking this might make it to our debut EP.

And the subject matter at the moment (one song being about sleeplessness due to determination. and one other song about standing up for yourself) I really feel like i'd like one everyone can relate to, that being anger and love for the opposite sex, should be on the EP.
i see what you mean about why it might come off cliche. i think it comes off clever more than anything though, at least the way i read it.
does your band have a myspace?

[beau blood rush]

sure do, but I'm not really into any of the songs on the page really, and the page is empty cos we're working on a massive new page to go with the EP

but here ya go

http://www.myspace.com/forourhero


you can also check out some videos of our songs and covers

here (http://www.youtube.com/forourhero)

and

here (http://www.youtube.com/theplaygroundmusic)

[nkalldayyy]

sure do, but I'm not really into any of the songs on the page really, and the page is empty cos we're working on a massive new page to go with the EP

but here ya go

http://www.myspace.com/forourhero


you can also check out some videos of our songs and covers

here (http://www.youtube.com/forourhero)

and

here (http://www.youtube.com/theplaygroundmusic)
okayy, cool :)