insaneconfusion
04/13/05, 01:51 AM
I know. This poem is pretty much like everyone elses these days, but I take great pride in my poetry. I would really appreciate it if you would comment on it.
And should the person who inspired me to write this poem come by, THANK YOU for everything :wan:
LIFE VS. DEATH
The dark reflections on your skin
Reminds me of my worst nightmare
Waking up, not having you by my side
Being lost inside of nothingness
Knowing nobody, being nobody
Misunderstood by everyone, judged and hated
Worth as much as the dirt in the street
Worth nothing
Never being held in your arms
Never being comforted by your words
Crying, screaming, whispering
Not knowing where I belong
Not knowing anything
Loved by no one, hated by everyone
The light betrays me
Befriending the darkness
Selling my soul
Selling my faith
Not knowing whom to trust
Not knowing who’s for real
Your eyes, a mirror reflecting my mistakes
Pointing out everything I’ve done wrong
The walls are closing in on me
Smothering silence screaming
I’ll bury the truth with the rest of my secrets
And let my past and future remain untold
And should the person who inspired me to write this poem come by, THANK YOU for everything :wan:
LIFE VS. DEATH
The dark reflections on your skin
Reminds me of my worst nightmare
Waking up, not having you by my side
Being lost inside of nothingness
Knowing nobody, being nobody
Misunderstood by everyone, judged and hated
Worth as much as the dirt in the street
Worth nothing
Never being held in your arms
Never being comforted by your words
Crying, screaming, whispering
Not knowing where I belong
Not knowing anything
Loved by no one, hated by everyone
The light betrays me
Befriending the darkness
Selling my soul
Selling my faith
Not knowing whom to trust
Not knowing who’s for real
Your eyes, a mirror reflecting my mistakes
Pointing out everything I’ve done wrong
The walls are closing in on me
Smothering silence screaming
I’ll bury the truth with the rest of my secrets
And let my past and future remain untold