Burning the Pictures of December

[xforestxwaitsx]

Am I really this cold,
so frozen that I would turn my head?
Waiting for a hand to hold
and yet all heart’s desires are dead.

Remembering the days of Indian summers no more,
resting my head on your shoulder,
tell me no lies, I know what you’re waiting for
but the love story grows ever colder.

The wicked ice of a broken heart,
covering the features I remember,
the words you spoke tore me apart,
and I burned the pictures of December.

The wintry glaze that sent you away,
no longer does it shine,
I hoped and prayed that one day you’d change,
but it’s dull from the degradation of time.

Memories I expected to be a mantle,
changed in a single instant,
ice has become of water in the channel,
and at last you are something distant.

You stabbed me where you knew I was weak,
hurt me beyond comprehension,
why is it my hatred that you seek,
instead of my undivided attention?

[xforestxwaitsx]

Ok, guess no one likes this one. Bump!

[apoemtothedead]

Noboooooooody cares

[heyRomanticA__x]

I like it, makes me feel cold. :(

Keep writing! :)

[xforestxwaitsx]

Noboooooooody cares
Yet another example of someone who thinks that I care what they think. Look, whoever you are and I don't really want to know, I appreciate constructive criticism, but what about that was constructive? Thank you for being honest, your opinion is duly noted and I'll hold onto it for future refrence. I don't know what crawled up your ass and died, but maybe you should go see a doctor. :laugh: Suck on it.

I like it, makes me feel cold. :(

Keep writing! :)
Thank you for reading it. You, unlike some people, at least were nice about what you had to say. The poem was supposed to give a wintry/chilly imagery. I felt like that when I wrote it. Good to know that I got my point across.

[merv the perv]

I think it's pretty good. Evoked some emotion from me.

[xforestxwaitsx]

I think it's pretty good. Evoked some emotion from me.
Thank you, nice to know. Were you able to see the images I was projecting or not? Odd question to ask, I know, but its crucial to my writing. :spiny: