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-Pinkerton-
11/13/08, 10:41 PM
Just something i whipped up in class the other day

I sit at home and glance over the coast
Wishing if only I could make a toast
A toast to everything I once knew
And a toast to everyone that will not pull through
And my mother watches over her only son
While over seas, my father loads his gun
I have no idea where he is or what hes done
But I do know that neither side has won
And we get news every single day
Yet every time we throw it away
But today brought news that made a family instantly depressed
News that read "Father of one laid to rest"

fishingthe_sky
11/17/08, 06:59 PM
It's a nice sentiment, but nothing particularly interesting going on here.

Did you mean "son" in the fifth line?

onemoresong
11/17/08, 07:02 PM
i've heard of this holiday before, what's it for?

KingLoser
11/21/08, 06:32 AM
i've heard of this holiday before, what's it for?

hmm.. dont we all wonder.