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mercutio7
04/29/05, 05:28 AM
Hey all, this is on my Bands EP due out in a week or two "Save Our Cities" you can hear this song at www.purevolume.com/mercutiorock
"Captain Car Crash"

Narcissists on buisiness trips, clinging to their addictions
living life in retrospect, won't stop their children's eyes from blacking
second wives beat second chances. Take a breath, and death advances
In this world, money talks and I am one to keep my mouth shut.

It's safe to say I'm a mirror maze, a paper plain in a hurricane: her compass must be broken

We tuck our children in with sheets of ignorance
we take the time, to pacify, and sleep the night away
but if we kill our children's questions with a beaming facade
we will wake to a world of staind-glass Aristocrats

It's safe to say I'm a mirror maze, a paper plain in a hurricane.
Her compass must be broken

This is my Fever Frenzy, and won't you come along.
I am Captain Car Crash, and I'm here to take you home

ophelia
04/29/05, 05:33 AM
im jealous of your amazing writing abilities.

Shoes
04/29/05, 07:04 AM
I really like it, the chorus and first verse are my favourite parts.

Blueskyburning
04/29/05, 09:41 AM
glassJAw logo, score!

mercutio7
04/29/05, 04:21 PM
Thanks for all the positive feedback! and yes, Glassjaw owns my soul, and Daryl Palumbo is my Moses

sunpoison
05/01/05, 08:24 AM
MERCUTIO7! My favourite poster in this forum.

Love it as usual.

Azrael
05/02/05, 11:04 PM
very nice. flows, good subject material, yay for vocab, and the ending...i don't know. it's so random, but i like it. it makes me think of motion city soundtrack for some reason.
me likes the intro riffs.

mercutio7
05/03/05, 03:13 AM
Thanks again everyone for the positive feedback everyone! Remember, if you like us, don't forget to vote for us in the Ernie Ball BAttle of the BAnds, peace all.

xforestxwaitsx
05/04/05, 01:54 PM
Love it and your inspiration for your screen name. Romeo and Juliet, no I'm not a crazy romantic who upholds Romeo and Juliet up as what it isn't, a sappy love story, I know just as well as my high school english teacher, it's a tredgedy. Two kids kill themselves for eachother, happy ending huh?
ps I still like the play anyway