Thousand Times a Coward

[xhandpaintedx]

Serenaded by guns and knives.
Forever more.
Cyanide clears your throat.
Then leaves you drenched
in your own mascarade.

[fishingthe_sky]

I'm going to be honest, my first thought was, "What My Chemical Romance song is this from?"

The diction and images are overly used, and thus are pretty ineffectual. The violence comes across as superficial.

Also, the metaphor in the last two lines is pretty meaningless without a context.

[Validor25]

I'm going to be honest, my first thought was, "What My Chemical Romance song is this from?"

HAHAHA!!! You took the words right out of my mouth!