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xh0peLeSsx
05/05/05, 03:57 PM
Your love, Is my Bloodline march 25 / 2005

Wake up to the morning light
As I open my eyes to the black and white
Take a moment, try to find my place
How do you find a non-existant space?

My mind folds like the note in her hand
As it floats in the wind and drops to the ground
Knowing in her head, its the last she'll recieve
All this time we slowly drifted apart
Beginning to cool and freeze my heart
So it could be easily broken, but my love remains frozen
Fixated on my one-and-only, forever you will be
On the day I die your my last memory

Your beautiful eyes, I always got lost inside
The way I felt, when I felt for you
Will go on forever, my mind focused on you
and us together.

An angel seen through my eyes
The image of you still runs through my mind
The only time in which I don't remain blind
While the days slowly fade, the nights are forever
These dreams I have of you and me together
My heart is melting, with every tear that I cry
Each one reflecting an image of you inside
The one who made my dreams come true
You can't have thoughts without thinking
and mine were of you.

Left deep and lonely in this deep dark space
You can tell im afraid by the look in my face.
Afraid to be alone, not knowing where im going
You were my guiding light, please take my hand
Once again, save me from this dreaded place
Your the cure for my illness, which is not having you
Removing the sickness, replaced with my love for you.

I might live everday in this world of black and white
But it's a world we both live in together, hand in hand
Be with me forever, for the world is a dark cold place
Without your love, taking its place.

When I die, my love for you will live on forever true
All that I'am is , all thanks to you
If I had to choose between breathing or loving you
I would use my last breath to tell you how much
I loved you......

By: Drew Parent

if possible could you rate this from 1-10? ..thanx:)

apoemtothedead
05/05/05, 04:15 PM
1.

IAmCountryMusic
05/06/05, 01:05 AM
2.

Andy
05/06/05, 02:14 AM
3.

Signals Corrupted
05/06/05, 02:58 AM
....o'clock, 4 o'clock rock. 5 6 7 o'clock, 8 o'clock rock... 9 10 11 o'clock 12 o'clock rock.. we're gonna rock around the clock tonight...

punkpixie
05/06/05, 04:11 AM
were gonna rock, rock, rock till this poem gets good.








oh wait....

xh0peLeSsx
05/06/05, 06:43 AM
good thing everyones such assholes......

punkthischick13
05/06/05, 06:56 AM
i thought it was quite intresting myself nice imagery

xh0peLeSsx
05/06/05, 06:58 AM
thanx atleast someone has a intelectual mind and knows what poetry is :)

punkpixie
05/06/05, 08:56 AM
thanx atleast someone has a intelectual mind and knows what poetry is :)

yes I know I do. I'm good like that.

Because you obviously don't.

punklet2101
05/06/05, 09:18 AM
thanx atleast someone has a intelectual mind and knows what poetry is :)
Thanks for that. I needed a laugh

punkpixie
05/06/05, 10:22 AM
hahaha. They got shot down.

Signals Corrupted
05/06/05, 01:57 PM
thanx atleast someone has a intelectual mind and knows what poetry is :)


that was a terrible sentence... by the way, i totally told you that this poem rocks around the clock!

IAmCountryMusic
05/06/05, 02:07 PM
4.

kimosabe
05/09/05, 05:21 PM
4.
LATE

xh0peLeSsx
05/10/05, 07:23 AM
Holy fuck who is the imposter? :o hmm..........

ArTkY_
05/10/05, 03:52 PM
thanx atleast someone has a intelectual mind and knows what poetry is :)
This is how an intellectual person would have wrote that:

Thanks, at least someone has an intellectual mind and knows what poetry is. :)

That or they just wouldn't say something so stupid, you decide.

IAmCountryMusic
05/10/05, 05:24 PM
This is how an intellectual person would have wrote that:

Thanks, at least someone has an intellectual mind and knows what poetry is. :)

That or they just wouldn't say something so stupid, you decide.
i like you:D

ArTkY_
05/10/05, 05:59 PM
i like you:D
haha thanks

:fuck:?

IAmCountryMusic
05/11/05, 12:24 AM
haha thanks

:fuck:?
yes? :huh:

ArTkY_
05/11/05, 10:01 AM
sorry :( I'll never say that again.