Serious lyrics

[allelish]

OK, so i'm quite anxious as to what you all may think of this. Any constructive criticism is welcome. I've pieced this together over the last 7 or 8 years. Let me know what you think.

If you're alone and you need a friend
Someone to make you forget your problems
Just come along baby
Take my hand
I'll be your lover tonight

This is what I wanna do
Let's have some fun
What I want is me and you

Boom boom boom boom
I want you in my room
Let's spend the night together
From now until forever
Boom boom boom boom
I wanna go boom boom
Let's spend the night together
Together in my room

Everybody get on down
The Vengaboys are back in town

This is what I wanna do
Let's have some fun
What I want is me and you

Boom boom boom boom
I want you in my room
Let's spend the night together
From now until forever
Boom boom boom boom
I wanna go boom boom
Let's spend the night together
Together in my room

Boom boom boom boom
I want you in my room
Let's spend the night together
From now until forever
Boom boom boom boom
I wanna go boom boom
Let's spend the night together
Together in my room

Boom boom boom boom
I want you in my room
Let's spend the night together
From now until forever

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I also scribbled this track together over the last 3 or 4 years, i've laid down some serious beats to it but tell me what you think of the lyrics.

Yo listen up here's a story
About a little guy that lives in a blue world
And all day and all night and everything he sees
Is just blue like him inside and outside
Blue his house with a blue little window
And a blue corvette
And everything is blue for him and hisself
And everybody around
Cos he ain't got nobody to listen to

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

I have a blue house with a blue window.
Blue is the colour of all that I wear.
Blue are the streets and all the trees are too.
I have a girlfriend and she is so blue.
Blue are the people here that walk around,
Blue like my corvette, it's standing outside.
Blue are the words I say and what I think.
Blue are the feelings that live inside me.

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

I have a blue house with a blue window.
Blue is the colour of all that I wear.
Blue are the streets and all the trees are too.
I have a girlfriend and she is so blue.
Blue are the people here that walk around,
Blue like my corvette, it's standing outside.
Blue are the words I say and what I think.
Blue are the feelings that live inside me.

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

Inside and outside blue his house
With the blue little window and a blue corvette
And everything is blue for him and hisself
And everybody around cause he ain't got
Nobody to listen to

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die...

I'm blue (if I was green I would die)

[IAmCountryMusic]

so are you in a hardcore/metalcore band then?

[ArTkY_]

haha

owned

[apoemtothedead]

hm. So it's 'if i was green I would die?'

I could never figure out what they were saying.

[para ser libre]

you have good taste in inspiration... it's liek those songs hit me so hard i almost feel as if they've played over and over and over in my head for years... it was amazing, i give you teh full award of 10 scene points...