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soreloser
05/07/05, 09:43 AM
The caffeine makes my mind race.

my middle name it is regret
with hypocrite hyphenated,
the medication, it does shit
i still feel just as lost.
if i could get a hold of you
i would hold you 'till you burst
the person that you are brings me back down to my worst.

don't speak my name
don't say a word.
was that your voice that i just heard?
the wind screams hard
i can't escape your breath
it's time for me to put us both to rest.

she was a dream that i could touch
but not too much,
yet just enough for me to know
to know that she was falling just as hard as me.
but love turns to hate
at the drop of a hat
our hearts they are too weak,
and i'm too attached...

her trembling hands they held my heavy heart
until eventually she fell apart
from abuse and disease
which has yet to be found
but it comes to the surface when i am around
her smile fades to frowns
leaving me to fall quick
with a feeling which makes my starved stomache sick
so i'll lay awake in bed until i forget her face
the memory of this girl which i can't seem to erase.

don't speak my name
don't say a word.
was that your voice that i just heard?
the wind screams hard
i can't escape your breath
it's time for me to put us both to rest.

apoemtothedead
05/07/05, 12:15 PM
don't say a word.

Next time take your own advice.

ArTkY_
05/07/05, 01:05 PM
ive decided that nothing cant be cliche.

IAmCountryMusic
05/07/05, 01:43 PM
raw raw raw :dance: :woot:

soreloser
05/07/05, 05:43 PM
Next time take your own advice.

Stop posting in my threads if you're going to be a dick. You have no merit for any of your shots.

apoemtothedead
05/07/05, 05:47 PM
I do have reason for my shots. Here's an example.

The caffeine makes my mind race.

my middle name it is regret
with hypocrite hyphenated,
the medication, it does shit
i still feel just as lost.
if i could get a hold of you
i would hold you 'till you burst
the person that you are brings me back down to my worst.

don't speak my name
don't say a word.
was that your voice that i just heard?
the wind screams hard
i can't escape your breath
it's time for me to put us both to rest.

she was a dream that i could touch
but not too much,
yet just enough for me to know
to know that she was falling just as hard as me.
but love turns to hate
at the drop of a hat
our hearts they are too weak,
and i'm too attached...

her trembling hands they held my heavy heart
until eventually she fell apart
from abuse and disease
which has yet to be found
but it comes to the surface when i am around
her smile fades to frowns
leaving me to fall quick
with a feeling which makes my starved stomache sick
so i'll lay awake in bed until i forget her face
the memory of this girl which i can't seem to erase.

don't speak my name
don't say a word.
was that your voice that i just heard?
the wind screams hard
i can't escape your breath
it's time for me to put us both to rest.

soreloser
05/08/05, 12:04 AM
Touché.

IAmCountryMusic
05/08/05, 12:54 AM
ouch

sunpoison
05/08/05, 08:08 AM
The rhyming makes it weird for me.

soreloser
05/08/05, 08:31 AM
Yeah. I mean, I'm not all that proud of it. I am just under pressure to make more songs, I have a show at the end of the month and we hardly have enough songs for a solid set. If you guys can help me at all, that would be awesome.

ArTkY_
05/08/05, 11:50 AM
make it shorter, its too long.. im sure you can say what you want to in less words