My band's new demo, please give critisicm :)

[Chiefgango]

http://www.myspace.com/theopeninterview

it's called 'Someone Help Me', thanks for listening in advance :)

[ManicanParty49]

Obviously quality is an issue.

Other than that, I am not a fan of the drummer's transitions, as I think it overall takes away from the song. The vocals are boring, and sound emotionless.

One big thing to work on is song construction and how the instrumentation works for what you are trying to do. I don't know how much time you spend on each part, but don't just play one riff, and go, "okay that's our starting point".

Everyone has their own way of writing songs, so I'm not trying to make you conform to my way of writing, but I think you guys have a lot of work to do with this.

I'm excited to hear more though to see if you guys take any of my criticism and use it in future songs, or maybe a second take of this one.