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punkpixie
05/09/05, 11:23 AM
He pulled at the noose, he pulled at the cord,
He looked at the birds; so gentle and bored
Swelling and swelling, till they reached the top
‘Help them’ he cried, ‘please tell them to stop….’
In his last few moments a great concern
For everyone and everything that awaited his turn
Death now approaches, speedy and quick
And he holds on and holds, while his stomach feels sick
The woman now sees him, and he only hopes this:
That she’ll come to him swiftly and give him a kiss
Here comes the black hood, here comes the strife;
The changing and wishing, he’d lived his life;
Better than this and with more honesty its true
But no one feels guilty for what they will do
The wood is worn and knows its place
To cleanse the scum from the human race
And leave a hole where the feet should be
Struggling and struggling, it’s only me
As I watch from the crowd I feel no guilt
To my flowers I lie and slowly they wilt
The black does not know, its got the wrong one
When morning brings heaven, I shall be gone.

Coco
05/09/05, 11:40 AM
Awesome! I'm a touch too superficial to grasp poety but nonetheless... I enjoyed it.

punkpixie
05/09/05, 12:01 PM
Awesome! I'm a touch too superficial to grasp poety but nonetheless... I enjoyed it.

Thank you Nick. You don't have to grasp it, as long as you enjoyed it.

ArTkY_
05/09/05, 02:08 PM
wow, good job. that was really good.. it made sense, flowed well, had a good rhyme scheme and i enjoyed it.

punkpixie
05/09/05, 02:33 PM
wow, good job. that was really good.. it made sense, flowed well, had a good rhyme scheme and i enjoyed it.

Thank you.

kimosabe
05/09/05, 05:16 PM
wow, good job. that was really good.. it made sense, flowed well, had a good rhyme scheme and i enjoyed it.
now thats stooping low to get into a girls pants...

punkpixie
05/10/05, 09:53 AM
now thats stooping low to get into a girls pants...

You don't have to stoop low, because you are probably looking up half the time anyway.

Shoes
05/10/05, 12:03 PM
Thank you Nick. You don't have to grasp it, as long as you enjoyed it.
And I swear he was a chick.

It was rad ellie, this sounds dumb but I was listening to this weird hiphop whilst I read it and it went really well, kinda like beat poetry.

punkpixie
05/10/05, 01:01 PM
And I swear he was a chick.

It was rad ellie, this sounds dumb but I was listening to this weird hiphop whilst I read it and it went really well, kinda like beat poetry.

haha thats not dumb, thats awesome!

Shoes
05/10/05, 01:04 PM
radness:)

Coco
05/10/05, 01:15 PM
And I swear he was a chick.

.

Puh! I am not in the least bit feminine!

Shoes
05/10/05, 01:16 PM
I do apoligise, but as I recall I like you, hello I'm aimee.
ellie write another poem for me to play hip-hop over.

Coco
05/10/05, 01:19 PM
That's fine. I'm sure the resentment will wear off in good time! I'm Nick, nice to 'meet' you! You make good mix CDs.

Shoes
05/10/05, 01:21 PM
:thumbsup:I thank you

punkpixie
05/10/05, 01:57 PM
I do apoligise, but as I recall I like you, hello I'm aimee.
ellie write another poem for me to play hip-hop over.

What like right now? haha

Shoes
05/10/05, 02:05 PM
Yeah dude right this second!

punkpixie
05/10/05, 02:26 PM
hahaha. Maybe tommorow...I have another one that has the same rhyme scheme. I'll put that up.

punkpixie
05/11/05, 10:05 AM
Someone else comment.

ArTkY_
05/11/05, 10:15 AM
neeeeeegro

punkpixie
05/11/05, 12:14 PM
very productive.

punkpixie
05/12/05, 01:43 PM
i dont want it to die!!!!

xforestxwaitsx
05/12/05, 02:19 PM
now thats stooping low to get into a girls pants...

Idiot......idiot....idiot...dumbass

Very well written. Keep writing, despite some of the people who come on here.

Coco
05/13/05, 05:09 AM
i dont want it to die!!!!

Just bumping it back up the list again..... I've got your back Guv!

punkpixie
05/13/05, 10:51 AM
Just bumping it back up the list again..... I've got your back Guv!

Much love Nick.