Let Us Burn

[Pseudonym]

Lighting the sulfur matches
And let us burn the floors
Underneath this wooden ground
were you left me to die right here, and I try to ignore..

This shut, where I've closed
out the sound of the kiss
where I lie
Alone in the room where a rose blooms , and then this

Let Us Burn
down these walls
And we'll tear
down these hallowed halls
tonight
tonight

Flickering these embers, as they drip up on my face
Clenching up my eyes, letting my breath escape
cinging out my memories, and erasing when you left
As I burn my memories, trying to catch my breath

Let Us Burn
down these walls
And we'll tear
down these halls
Let us try
to crawl, out of the fall
You keep it all.....
..............................
..............................
And you...
Let us fall...
and you,
you try to
take it all
You've made me once yearn for you
and now
Now you want me to BURN YOU!

Let Us Burn
down these walls
And we'll tear
down these hallowed halls
Incinerate
My body into this kiss
And I!
I let it fall, in to this

-fini'

Well that was another of my works, enjoy i guess

[apoemtothedead]

It'll burn burn burn like they did to the Anarchists at their stakes.

[ArTkY_]

the first part was bearable, but the second one should burn

[apoemtothedead]

the first part was bearable, but the second one should burn
...like the histories they stole from us.

[IAmCountryMusic]

screamo is cool i guess

[Pseudonym]

I'm please don't call me dumb, but i have no fucking clue what either of you are talking about, so please, try to be specific a little bit at least

[apoemtothedead]

I'm please don't

dumbass.

[Pseudonym]

I'm to tired to write right

[IAmCountryMusic]

screamo is gay

[marrost]

screamo is gay
1. They're just words.
2. You don't even know what screamo is.

[Pseudonym]

uhm, ok, mind my ignorance, but what is scremo

[kimosabe]

uhm, ok, mind my ignorance, but what is scremo
gay.

[xforestxwaitsx]

dumbass.

idiot, yes let's all be five and engage in a bout of name calling just because of the way that someone types.

[ArTkY_]

uhm, ok, mind my ignorance, but what is scremo
Basically hardcore emo.

[Pseudonym]

ok uhm that sure clears it up
ok and if you wanna engage in a bout of name calling why don't you just fucking start you shithead

[apoemtothedead]

idiot, yes let's all be five and engage in a bout of name calling just because of the way that someone types.
okay. You lose.

[xforestxwaitsx]

okay. You lose.

i refuse to argue with an idiot such as yourself. I have a theory on that.
"Never argue with an idiot. They'll drag you down to their level and beat you with experience."
And so ends your pathetic little prod at provking me. YOU lose.

[apoemtothedead]

Fuck these shitty lyrics. This threads now a poll. Who is better me or the shitfuck above me?

[ArTkY_]

I've loved Mark since I've joined the forum :love: How could I say otherwise?

[xforestxwaitsx]

this "shitfuck" doesn't give a damn what the rest of the world thinks about her and once again, i'd like to point out that you are reverting to the behaviour of a five year old.

[apoemtothedead]

this "shitfuck" doesn't give a damn what the rest of the world thinks about her and once again, i'd like to point out that you are reverting to the behaviour of a five year old.
...and so far it's unanimous.

[xforestxwaitsx]

...and so far it's unanimous.

go cry to your mommy......wahhhh! the mean girl called me juvenile...ican't believe her.

[apoemtothedead]

go cry to your mommy......wahhhh! the mean girl called me juvenile...ican't believe her.
you have now stooped down to my level. Prepare to be torn apart.

[ArTkY_]

God, not again.

[xforestxwaitsx]

God, not again.

that's what i said.

look you idiot, i already told you, i'm not going to engage in a battle of wits with you, i don't like to fight people without a weapon
ps stupidity doesn't count as a weapon

[ArTkY_]

that's what i said.

look you idiot, i already told you, i'm not going to engage in a battle of wits with you, i don't like to fight people without a weapon
ps stupidity doesn't count as a weapon
No I meant... he's gonna own someone else. You can't beat him in an argument.

[xforestxwaitsx]

bring it on......he's met his match
keep the stupidty coming so I can put you down some more. it's fun.

[apoemtothedead]

bring it on......he's met his match
keep the stupidty coming so I can put you down some more. it's fun.
First. How old are you?

[xforestxwaitsx]

seventeen, why?

[apoemtothedead]

Just seeing if you were worth my time.

[xforestxwaitsx]

ahhhh, i see, so you would discount someone younger. well, oh mighty king of all that is sarcastic, am I "worth your time" or should you just leave now?

[Brianfarg]

ahhhh, i see, so you would discount someone younger. well, oh mighty king of all that is sarcastic, am I "worth your time" or should you just leave now?

Prepare to be owned...

[IAmCountryMusic]

God, not again.
praise allah

[Pseudonym]

i'm not sure if i should take sides on this so i think i'm just going to stand on the sidelines and watch, this is getting slightly entertaining

[xforestxwaitsx]

And once again I win. This has been on here for the longest and he still hasn't come back to it. I think he's still trying to think of some way to insult me.

[kimosabe]

And once again I win. This has been on here for the longest and he still hasn't come back to it. I think he's still trying to think of some way to insult me.
wow that really made your day, huh? you should try fucking. or getting out...



























of the closet ***

[IAmCountryMusic]

And once again I win. This has been on here for the longest and he still hasn't come back to it. I think he's still trying to think of some way to insult me.
either youre a girl or a very gay man

[ArTkY_]

And once again I win. This has been on here for the longest and he still hasn't come back to it. I think he's still trying to think of some way to insult me.
That doesn't mean you won. He just doesn't waste his time after a while.

[xforestxwaitsx]

That doesn't mean you won. He just doesn't waste his time after a while.

Hey! I thought you were nice!?! :( All he does on here is waste time and smash the dreams of some good writers.

either youre a girl or a very gay man

try a girl.

wow that really made your day, huh? you should try fucking. or getting out...



























of the closet ***

You first, asshole.

[ArTkY_]

Hey! I thought you were nice!?! :( All he does on here is waste time and smash the dreams of some good writers.
I can be, but I felt like making someone feel wrong. lol

[xforestxwaitsx]

I can be, but I felt like making someone feel wrong. lol

ahhhh...i see. i can't really say much, i do the same thing.

[kimosabe]

ahhhh...i see. i can't really say much, i do the same thing.
yeah, but you suck at it.

[xforestxwaitsx]

yeah, but you suck at it.

someone's one to talk

[kimosabe]

someone's one to talk
what? is that...supposed to be an insult? That's like the type of shit you would say in kidergarten. What next, "I'm rubber, you're glue...."? Then again you probly were too busy getting molested by the old women working at your kidergarten, that had a fetish for animals and felt like you were the closeste one with your special shnauzer/pittbull-like look. Except uglier. And If i sucked so much at insults, kinda weird how I'm in everyones signatures? believe the hype bitch.

[Pseudonym]

wow, this is really childish, except with words like bitch replacing words like butthead. how sad, how sad.

[ArTkY_]

wow, this is really childish, except with words like bitch replacing words like butthead. how sad, how sad.
If anyone shouldn't be talking about naivety, its you.

[xforestxwaitsx]

what? is that...supposed to be an insult? That's like the type of shit you would say in kidergarten. What next, "I'm rubber, you're glue...."? Then again you probly were too busy getting molested by the old women working at your kidergarten, that had a fetish for animals and felt like you were the closeste one with your special shnauzer/pittbull-like look. Except uglier. And If i sucked so much at insults, kinda weird how I'm in everyones signatures? believe the hype bitch.

might i remind you that you are the one who acts five most of the time, why shouldn't I spoon feed insults to you. considering that you've never even seen me before, the whole "shnauzer/pittbull" comment just makes you look stupid. on to people putting you in their signatures. look, iknow people are stupid, i have examples like you. you don't have to prove how stupid they are by telling me you're in their signatures now.

[IAmCountryMusic]

try a girl.
okay, i was assuming that by your sig, but i didnt want to say anything and be wrong.

[kimosabe]

look, iknow people are stupid, i have examples like you..
oh, I also have some examples: a signature that reads:
"He loves me....he loves me not.....you said you'd always be there, how about you forget me...it's just that easy"
Liking The early november
and "favourite books: Harry Potter series (what, I'm addicted?)"

[IAmCountryMusic]

look at me!! im sad!!!:(:(:(:(:(

i want sympathy!!!

[ArTkY_]

look at me!! im sad!!!:(:(:(:(:(

i want sympathy!!!

*hug*

[para ser libre]

i refuse to argue with an idiot such as yourself. I have a theory on that.
"Never argue with an idiot. They'll drag you down to their level and beat you with experience."
And so ends your pathetic little prod at provking me. YOU lose.


thats not your theory you thief it is someone elses your stealing and using for your own...

[xforestxwaitsx]

thats not your theory you thief it is someone elses your stealing and using for your own...

I adopted it as a creed. What, it has a copyright now?

[Pseudonym]

can't anyone adopt a theory, otherwise it'd just be one persons idea right, I think. So many insults are going back and forth, now children can't we all just play nice for a little while, I mean can you not just agree to disagree, of something because this isn't all that funny, nor entertaining, it's all based on a he said / she said opinionized deal, niether of you will ever be right and the agruing will go on forever until one of you just gives up for the hell of it. And I'm guessing this is the part where you'll all read my post, wonder what the hell I'm thinking and then make fun of me some more.

[kchubb]

ok uhm that sure clears it up
ok and if you wanna engage in a bout of name calling why don't you just fucking start you shithead

If you came here for constuctive criticism on your writing you might as well leave... the people here are immature and think their funny and ruin this entire forum...

i kind of liked it though...

[apoemtothedead]

If you came here for constuctive criticism on your writing you might as well leave... the people here are immature and think their funny and ruin this entire forum...

i kind of liked it though...
ruin? or make it better?

It's they're, by the way.

[IAmCountryMusic]

If you came here for constuctive criticism on your writing you might as well leave... the people here are immature and think their funny and ruin this entire forum...
thats mark:D

[ArTkY_]

thats not your theory you thief it is someone elses your stealing and using for your own...
You can adopt theories.

[kchubb]

ruin? or make it better?

It's they're, by the way.

No, you ruin it. You act exactly like all of the "punk" kids in my town... in fact, I'm pretty sure you are from my town... you think you're funny, but you're not... you're annoying and immature and you don't know when to stop. You add nothing here... it's getting old...

Thanks for the grammar help too...

[ArTkY_]

No, you ruin it. You act exactly like all of the "punk" kids in my town... in fact, I'm pretty sure you are from my town... you think you're funny, but you're not... you're annoying and immature and you don't know when to stop. You add nothing here... it's getting old...

Thanks for the grammar help too...
1. It never gets old.
2. He is from your town :O

[apoemtothedead]

1. It never gets old.
2. He is from your town :O
Bullshit. He's from my town.

[ArTkY_]

Bullshit. He's from my town.
I'm sorry master :(

[apoemtothedead]

No, you ruin it. You act exactly like all of the "punk" kids in my town... in fact, I'm pretty sure you are from my town... you think you're funny, but you're not... you're annoying and immature and you don't know when to stop. You add nothing here... it's getting old...

Thanks for the grammar help too...
How ironic. You're like 60% of the people from my town. They go nowhere in life.

[kchubb]

How ironic. You're like 60% of the people from my town. They go nowhere in life.

This coming from the person who has enough of a life to post 15 times a day in and online chat forum with people he doesn't even know... and they aren't even quality posts... right...

[ArTkY_]

15 times a day = 20 minutes.

[Pseudonym]

uhm, i'm speechless, i'm not really sure what to say anymore. Uhm I guess just continue with the whole whatever you were doing thing

[apoemtothedead]

This coming from the person who has enough of a life to post 15 times a day in and online chat forum with people he doesn't even know... and they aren't even quality posts... right...
You graduate last year, I believe, and you still live at home, so shut the fuck up.

[kchubb]

You graduate last year, I believe, and you still live at home, so shut the fuck up.

Actually I go to school in Santa Barabara...

[apoemtothedead]

Actually I go to school in Santa Barabara...
It's the live-away JC I bet.