Desperation

[jawkneephighv]

Desperation

And when the day is through
Metaphors aside
I miss you so
And I cry
When it’s early enough
As the stars fade
Holding your photo
In blood I lay

[punkpixie]

Short, but original sounding (well apart from the bit about blood and photos) I actually liked it.

[tragic.beauty]

Wow, I like it...short but very vivid.

[jawkneephighv]

Suicide has beauty in it.

[apoemtothedead]

Suicide has beauty in it.
yeah, like you never posting again.

[jawkneephighv]

yeah, like you never posting again.
Oh, I found a cure for your asshole-ism:
Vagisil.

[apoemtothedead]

Oh, I found a cure for your asshole-ism:
Vagisil.
You dead yet?

[jawkneephighv]

You dead yet?
You're from Pleasanton? Wow, that's the most homo town other than San Francisco. Anywho, take your PMS out somewhere else -- like Stoneridge Mall, kid.

[apoemtothedead]

Jealous because they average house price is about $1 million?

And I think I will go to the mall. kthx.

[jawkneephighv]

Jealous because they average house price is about $1 million?

And I think I will go to the mall. kthx.
You're 17. You can't even buy a pack of cigarettes. You can barely watch a rated R movie. Hahaha, you act as if YOU have the money to buy a house. Please, if anything it's your parents spoonfeeding your rich-ass and giving you everything you want, spoiled bitch. I'd rather be "poor" and independent . Hey, know what a job is? Not a BLOW job, silly.

[apoemtothedead]

You're 17. You can't even buy a pack of cigarettes. You can barely watch a rated R movie. Hahaha, you act as if YOU have the money to buy a house. Please, if anything it's your parents spoonfeeding your rich-ass and giving you everything you want, spoiled bitch. I'd rather be "poor" and independent . Hey, know what a job is? Not a BLOW job, silly.
Yes, I have a job. Thanks for asking.

[a typicalcliche]

You're 17. You can't even buy a pack of cigarettes. You can barely watch a rated R movie. Hahaha, you act as if YOU have the money to buy a house. Please, if anything it's your parents spoonfeeding your rich-ass and giving you everything you want, spoiled bitch. I'd rather be "poor" and independent . Hey, know what a job is? Not a BLOW job, silly.
what did you score on the sats?

[apoemtothedead]

what did you score on the sats?
Judging by his writing, not very well.

[jawkneephighv]

Yes, I have a job. Thanks for asking.
Standing on the corner of Stoneridge Drive and Stoneridge Mall Road in hopes of plowing other men doesn't count.
what did you score on the sats?
Why did you lose your virginity to a mechanical bull?

[apoemtothedead]

Why did you lose your virginity to a mechanical bull?

How very ripped-off from Family Guy of you.

[jawkneephighv]

Judging by his writing, not very well.
So a few of my poems/songs and you think you know how smart I am? You're 17. You don't even know what Anthropology or Organic Chemistry are.

[apoemtothedead]

Standing on the corner of Stoneridge Drive and Stoneridge Mall Road in hopes of plowing other men doesn't count.

Good. I still have a job then.

So a few of my poems/songs and you think you know how smart I am? You're 17. You don't even know what Anthropology or Organic Chemistry are.
Funny you should mention. I had my AP Chem test yesterday. I think I did quite well on it.

[a typicalcliche]

Anthropology or Organic Chemistry are.


who needs to know that?

[jawkneephighv]

How very ripped-off from Family Guy of you.
Okay.

who needs to know that?
Who needs to know my SAT score? Ding.

[apoemtothedead]

Who needs to know my SAT score? Ding.


Well I'll just tell you (because I know you didn't do better) that I got a 1420.

[ArTkY_]

Bounding and gagging anyone?

Well I'll just tell you (because I know you didn't do better) that I got a 1420.
1600 scale?

[a typicalcliche]

Why did you lose your virginity to a mechanical bull?

I would love to stay and chat, but youre a total bitch

[jawkneephighv]

Well I'll just tell you (because I know you didn't do better) that I got a 1420.
And we're going where with this? I mean, you're still homo.

[apoemtothedead]

1600 scale?


yep. 2020 on the 2400 scale.

[jawkneephighv]

I would love to stay and chat, but youre a total bitch
And now we go live to a typicalcliche being a bitch. a typicalcliche?

[apoemtothedead]

And we're going where with this? I mean, you're still homo.
That you're going nowhere in life writing shitty poems on an online message board. I am.

[ArTkY_]

yep. 2020 on the 2400 scale.
Thats really good, I hope to do that good on my SAT.. I'm still a sophomore so I haven't taken it yet...

[a typicalcliche]

And now we go live to a typicalcliche being a bitch. a typicalcliche?
this is a typicalcliche live and you are a ***got

[apoemtothedead]

this is a typicalcliche live and you are a ***got
hhahaha.

Tariq, you wanna finish off his scene points?

[ArTkY_]

this is a typicalcliche live and you are a ***got
rofl

[a typicalcliche]

That you're going nowhere in life writing shitty poems on an online message board. I am.
dude, chill out. hes also the assistant manager at the movie theaters.

[ArTkY_]

hhahaha.

Tariq, you wanna finish off his scene points?
Would be my pleasure

[jawkneephighv]

That you're going nowhere in life writing shitty poems on an online message board. I am.
Have fun being pampered by mommy and daddy your whole life. It'll be great when you're in the real world and then you start writing shitty poems/songs like mine. But they'll be worse, of course.
this is a typicalcliche live and you are a ***got
Wow, that was pathetic. Weren't you leaving? Don't you have a Geometry test to study for?

[a typicalcliche]

Wow, that was pathetic. Weren't you leaving? Don't you have a Geometry test to study for?

im actually taking math analysis and im a jr

[apoemtothedead]

But they'll be worse, of course.

Impossible.

[jawkneephighv]

Would be my pleasure
Oh no, please don't. I want to be part of the in-crowd like you guys! I even have my Hollister shirt! :(

[apoemtothedead]

Oh no, please don't. I want to be part of the in-crowd like you guys! I even have my Hollister shirt! :(
Fuck off and die.

[jawkneephighv]

dude, chill out. hes also the assistant manager at the movie theaters.
You can't see half the movies that are out. You can barely get a job at places other than what, Hot Topic, Jamba Juice, etc?

[ArTkY_]

Oh no, please don't. I want to be part of the in-crowd like you guys! I even have my Hollister shirt! :(
I'm wearing Pakistani clothes right now.

Mark, a typical (whats your name again?), finish him?

[jawkneephighv]

Fuck off and die.
Go ask mommy to warm you up a bottle of milk.

[a typicalcliche]

a typical (whats your name again?), finish him?
im billy

You can't see half the movies that are out. You can barely get a job at places other than what, Hot Topic, Jamba Juice, etc?

i can see any movie i want. i dont need a job yet, im only 16, until then mommy and daddy will pamper me

[ArTkY_]

im billy
So I was right :)

[apoemtothedead]

Go ask mommy to warm you up a bottle of milk.
I'll ask her for a wad of cash while I'm at it.

[jawkneephighv]

i can see any movie i want. i dont need a job yet, im only 16, until then mommy and daddy will pamper me
Don't forget to tell them to wipe your ass.
I'll ask her for a wad of cash while I'm at it.
Why not just get breast fed instead?

[ArTkY_]

Go ask mommy to warm you up a bottle of milk.
But... but! I learned how to use the microwave yesterday!

[jawkneephighv]

But... but! I learned how to use the microwave yesterday!
You obviously haven't learned how to be funny yet. Keep trying, stud.

[a typicalcliche]

so what are some new movies coming out?

[ArTkY_]

You obviously haven't learned how to be funny yet. Keep trying, stud.
Yeah... I guess I'll just keep giving points to billy as a hobby :(

[apoemtothedead]

I'm guessing you go to Ohlone.

[jawkneephighv]

so what are some new movies coming out?
Shitty ones other than Star Wars. Kingdom of Heaven wasn't too shabby.

[a typicalcliche]

I guess I'll just keep giving points to billy as a hobby
sounds like a plan

[jawkneephighv]

I'm guessing you go to Ohlone.
I'm guessing your mom went back to Ohlone.
No, I go to a less shittier school: SJSU.

[apoemtothedead]

I'm guessing your mom went back to Ohlone.
No, I go to a less shittier school: SJSU.
Actually my mom went to the University of Michigan. Not some shitty state school.

[ArTkY_]

Blah, spam.

[jawkneephighv]

Actually my mom went to the University of Michigan. Not some shitty state school.
My mom went to Cornell University in New York. But that doesn't matter. I love how you go off in different directions. A.D.D. at its best.

[apoemtothedead]

And my mom went to Cornell University in New York. But that doesn't matter. I love how you go off in different directions. A.D.D. at its best.
You said my mom went to Ohlone. I proved you wrong.

[jawkneephighv]

You said my mom went to Ohlone. I proved you wrong.
I'm talking about in general, whore.

[apoemtothedead]

I'm talking about in general, whore.
She has never been there. She knows to avoid trash.

[jawkneephighv]

She has never been there. She knows to avoid trash.
As much as she avoids it, she gave birth to a great heap of it.

[apoemtothedead]

As much as she avoids it, she gave birth to a great heap of it.
Then what does that make the state schooler?

[jawkneephighv]

Then what does that make the state schooler?
Badass mother fucker.

[apoemtothedead]

dumbass mother fucker.

fixed it.

[jawkneephighv]

fixed it.
How'd you know I was about to ask you what makes the mommy/daddy freeloader? Thanks for answering in advance.

[apoemtothedead]

...that made sense.

[IAmCountryMusic]

How'd you know I was about to ask you what makes the mommy/daddy freeloader? Thanks for answering in advance.
thanks for ruining your sig :headshake

[ArTkY_]

How'd you know I was about to ask you what makes the mommy/daddy freeloader? Thanks for answering in advance.
He's in high school..

[apoemtothedead]

He's in high school..
..and currently smarter than you will ever be.

[ArTkY_]

..and currently smarter than you will ever be.
Are you saying that to me? Because I'm only 15 so you should be.

[jawkneephighv]

thanks for ruining your sig :headshake
Is that where you look for pleasure? Signatures? Jesus, I'll put a picture of a giant penis if that'll make you happy.
...that made sense.
I know.
He's in high school..
No, kid, you are.

[apoemtothedead]

Are you saying that to me? Because I'm only 15 so you should be.
No I was finishing your sentence.

[ArTkY_]

No, kid, you are.
I know I am, I was talking about Mark.

No I was finishing your sentence.
Okie.

[IAmCountryMusic]

Is that where you look for pleasure? Signatures? Jesus, I'll put a picture of a giant penis if that'll make you happy.
no im sorry im not homosexual, and i definently know i dont find pleasure in posting my shitty poems, then having pointless arguments over them even though i know they are horrific.
im pretty sure thats called sadism.

[a typicalcliche]

i hope your next poem is about us

[IAmCountryMusic]

i hope your next poem is about us
it will be called "i cut myself, waa waa waa. i need sympathy and a rim job"

[jawkneephighv]

no im sorry im not homosexual, and i definently know i dont find pleasure in posting my shitty poems, then having pointless arguments over them even though i know they are horrific.
im pretty sure thats called sadism.
Speak for yourself Mr. I hate Scene Points but I have a shitload of them. I know my poems/songs are shitty, I even admitted it awhile ago. I'm not here to defend them, I'm here to shutdown high school kids who think they're tough shit. It boosts my ego.

i hope your next poem is about us
Why so you can grow your hair out longer so it'll cover your eyes some more, little girl?

[apoemtothedead]

I'm here to shutdown high school kids who think they're tough shit

we're still waiting.

[ArTkY_]

i hope your next poem is about us
ROFL
I'm not here to defend them, I'm here to shutdown high school kids who think they're tough shit. It boosts my ego.
Ok? It makes you feel better to put down people who are younger than you? You are a sad, sad person...

[IAmCountryMusic]

Speak for yourself Mr. I hate Scene Points but I have a shitload of them. I know my poems/songs are shitty, I even admitted it awhile ago. I'm not here to defend them, I'm here to shutdown high school kids who think they're tough shit. It boosts my ego.
fuck scene points, i get them because im not hated and people agree with me and respect me.
as i can see, you are hated and no one respects you. i dont see a point to this argument.
what do scene points have to do with my response anyways?

and if you know that they are shitty, why post them? you know mark is going to give you shit about them, so youre just wasting your time if you want an actual oppinion.

by the way, you have ruined the likeness of justin pierre

[jawkneephighv]

Ok? It makes you feel better to put down people who are younger than you? You are a sad, sad person...
It does make me feel better.
fuck scene points, i get them because im not hated and people agree with me and respect me.
as i can see, you are hated and no one respects you. i dont see a point to this argument.
what do scene points have to do with my response anyways?

and if you know that they are shitty, why post them? you know mark is going to give you shit about them, so youre just wasting your time if you want an actual oppinion.

by the way, you have ruined the likeness of justin pierre
Wow, way to go on contradicting your entire quote on scene points in your signature, jackass! I don't give a fuck if anyone respects me on here or not -- I come in here post in some topics and that's it -- I'm not here to gain respect/popularity like the fairy you are. I'm glad you're queen of this messageboard with your cheeks spread wide open for some kissing, and hey, maybe some plowing. I post my songs/poems just because. I know there are plenty of assholes get a good boner off of shutting down my work and so I get a good laugh at retorting. How do I disrespect MCS? Because DLD is in my sig? Because I have a variety of taste in music? Sorry your music taste may be so shallow/limited you ignorant piece of shit.

we're still waiting.
To get shutdown again? Refer to what I said to Iamcountrymusic.

[apoemtothedead]

To get shutdown again?

...or for the first time.

[jawkneephighv]

...or for the first time.
Been there, done that.

[IAmCountryMusic]

Wow, way to go on contradicting your entire quote on scene points in your signature, jackass! I don't give a fuck if anyone respects me on here or not -- I come in here post in some topics and that's it -- I'm not here to gain respect/popularity like the fairy you are. I'm glad you're queen of this messageboard with your cheeks spread wide open for some kissing, and hey, maybe some plowing. I post my songs/poems just because. I know there are plenty of assholes have get a good boner off of shutting down my work and so I get a good laugh at retorting. How do I disrespect MCS? Because DLD is in my sig? Because I have a variety of taste in music? Sorry your music taste may be so shallow/limited you ignorant piece of shit.

hey stupid, i didnt say that. those are the comments that people leave when they take away my points, hence the ironic "i have fans" piece i have included. if you were literate you would have seen that.

im assuming because you cant think of any good comebacks you feel the need to call me a homosexual?
thats very mature. just think: im 17, youre however old you are and im more mature than you are.
time to stop being a dickhead and grow up.

and the reason you have ruined his name is because your avatar; youre actions of being an asshole are im sure embarassing to pierre. i would be embarassed if douches like you were fans of my music, i would even slit my wrist you were to listen to my music.

[apoemtothedead]

I don't care anymore.

[IAmCountryMusic]

happy birthday the other day.
youre 21 and youre still picking on little kids, pathetic.

[a typicalcliche]

i want to fight you

[IAmCountryMusic]

I don't care anymore.
me neither, so because he cant be the adult and walk away, you and i who arent adults will.

[jawkneephighv]

hey stupid, i didnt say that. those are the comments that people leave when they take away my points, hence the ironic "i have fans" piece i have included. if you were literate you would have seen that.

im assuming because you cant think of any good comebacks you feel the need to call me a homosexual?
thats very mature. just think: im 17, youre however old you are and im more mature than you are.
time to stop being a dickhead and grow up.

and the reason you have ruined his name is because your avatar; youre actions of being an asshole are im sure embarassing to pierre. i would be embarassed if douches like you were fans of my music, i would even slit my wrist you were to listen to my music.
wait a second, so now i have to mold myself under the eyes of bands i respect for them to like me? how about i listen to bands i like and that's where it ends? do you find out where justin shops and buy the same clothes he does? do you try to eat the same foods? look, drone, i know you have some conception about me being 21 and being "mature" but let's face facts -- we're both arguing here on the internet about stupidass shit --- so really, neither one of us is mature -- therefore, that point is completely void. second of all, who was talking about a rim job earlier? yeah you, so don't give me that "you resort to gay jokes because you suck" bullshit. gay jokes never get old. but your responses do. you and apoemtothedead. i'm glad you're finally giving up because this entire argument has been pretty trivial. all we've learned is that apoemtothedead is a mommy/daddy leech/freeloader/spoiled bitch and you're closed-minded to music and have the most ridiculous reasons to why i shouldn't have my avatar/signature -- if anything, you should grow up. we're talking about a stupid picture by ny mame...on a music messageboard...on the internet. so basically, all i'm trying to say is end your life...or respond less often to me unless you like getting your self-esteem crushed, take your pick.

[IAmCountryMusic]

about justin pierre, look at my profile pic. i know how justin would feel about a dickhead like you.

and about growing up: im 17 and still a kid, youre 21 which is considered a full adult, so i would think you were the mature one.

[jawkneephighv]

about justin pierre, look at my profile pic. i know how justin would feel about a dickhead like you.

and about growing up: im 17 and still a kid, youre 21 which is considered a full adult, so i would think you were the mature one.
so a picture with justin pierre makes it okay, right? so basically, you can be the whiny brat who runs her mouth to everyone but the pierre pic saves you, yes? here you go, bitch (http://img215.echo.cx/img215/9287/dsc007145ne.jpg)
and i'm not mature. i pick on little kids, for god's sake. it's one of my guilty pleasures.
p.s. i thought you were the big bad adult who was going to walk away? liar.

[IAmCountryMusic]

meeting people isnt as cool as making out with them, so i win

[jawkneephighv]

meeting people isnt as cool as making out with them, so i win
That's what you call making out? Damn, no wonder you're posting on here so damn much. What you don't know is that Justin let me touch his guitar during their performance. That was not a sexual innuendo, you pervert. Although after the song he went: "I let you touch it," hahahaha, lots of fun. What do you think of their second album?

[IAmCountryMusic]

better than the first.
less punk, more emo/pop.
i heard it on their bus, its my pick for album of the year.

why are two fans of one of the greatest bands ever arguing ove stupid things like this anyways?
i remember giving you alot of scene points in the past for you avatar and sig.

im sure you hate limbeck.

[jawkneephighv]

better than the first.
less punk, more emo/pop.
i heard it on their bus, its my pick for album of the year.

why are two fans of one of the greatest bands ever arguing ove stupid things like this anyways?
i remember giving you alot of scene points in the past for you avatar and sig.

im sure you hate limbeck.
back in a time when i was more ignorant than i am now, i wouldn't give limbeck a chance. i saw them in concert with mcs last year and hadn't heard of them until then and so when i saw them perform their uinque music i said, "what the fuck is this boring, pussy shit?" needless to say, months later, after growing out of that gay stage, i love them to death and kick myself in the balls a little when i listen to them because i wasn't rocking out at their show. i look foward to their new album though. i love them a lot.

you're right though. as of this moment, i'm done arguing with you. we both love mcs, limbeck, and tsl.

and i think album 2 from mcs is amazing -- i always fear the sophomore albums of bands but i knew they wouldn't let me down. album 2 is a lot catchier. i can't fucking wait till warped tour because of them being there.

[Alex Djaferis]

i liked the poem.