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lfdfforever
12/01/08, 11:02 PM
this self absorption may seem varied
but it comes in one convenient portion
and to whom it may concern
i'll leave my chatting ideas here
so their mislead plans will have a place to burn
and to who might understand
this dignity lays scattered fitting in
with every over looked grain of sand

from a descending point of view
to an optimistic look that passes through
my ability to see nothing but truth
has been blind for the same amount
of time i've spent with you

i don't know how to end this bastard. ideas would be helpful

lfdfforever
12/10/08, 10:03 AM
good god

Charles777
12/10/08, 03:55 PM
I liked it



but there could be more lines about
premature ejaculation

lfdfforever
12/10/08, 06:49 PM
I liked it



but there could be more lines about
premature ejaculation i could write a whole album about premature ejaculation

Charles777
12/11/08, 04:42 AM
Please do