god this hurt.

[soreloser]

i remember that night with you
the two of us lying together on my bed
you cried into my chest
i whispered that I love you
i've never said those words before
and meant it with everything i am
like i did at that moment
there was a feeling inside of myself
that told me you were perfect for me
i haven't let go of that feeling
even though you're no longer mine
i know it couldn't ever work
but it doesnt stop how this feels
it's been three months since you walked away
and i need to let this one go
i've spent too many listless nights
waiting for you to come back
i'm not angry with you
i know it's not your fault
we both suffer from things which kept us apart
i hope someday we'll be able to speak
without me acting in a way that i can't stand
it's not that i'm crazy
it just drives me out of my mind
when i hear your voice and see your face
and know that it's what i had but lost
just know that i still love you
and i always will.
you may not think you're worth a cent
but to me you're worth the world.

[apoemtothedead]

God that hurt.

[somesortofidiot]

i feel you man. keep on keepin on.

[soreloser]

God that hurt.

I saw that coming. How about I work on writing better poems if you work on making insults that aren't lame and predictable.

[apoemtothedead]

I saw that coming. How about I work on writing better poems if you work on making insults that aren't lame and predictable.
No deal. Lame and predictable insults are who I am.

[soreloser]

No deal. Lame and predictable insults are who I am.

Awesome.

[soreloser]

revised version.


This has gone on long enough...

i'm remembering that night with you
the two of us lying together on my bed,
you cried into my chest.
i whispered that I loved you.
i've never spoke those words before
and meant it with everything i am
inside and out.
there was a voice inside my mind,
it told me you were perfect for me.
i still hear it loud and clear
even though you've left my arms.
i know there was no way to make this work,
but that doesnt stop how this feels
an emptiness and longing for more.
time has vanished
and i need to let this one go.
i've spent too many listless nights
waiting for you to come running back.
i'm not angry with you
i know it's not your fault
we both suffer from things which kept us apart.
i hope someday we'll be able to speak
without me losing my cool and fumbling my words.
it just drives me out of my mind
when i hear your voice and see your face
and know it's what i had but lost.
just know that i still love you
and i always will.
you don't think you're worth a cent
but to me you're worth the world.

[punkpixie]

You're so emo. haha

[apoemtothedead]

still blows

[soreloser]

still blows

Fuck, You're an ignorant ***got who's copying the way Pat used to be. You're annoying and disgustingly ugly. Get over yourself and stop posting negative comments.

[apoemtothedead]

Fuck, You're an ignorant ***got who's copying the way Pat used to be. You're annoying and disgustingly ugly. Get over yourself and stop posting negative comments.
...says the Canadian.

[soreloser]

...says the Canadian.

Yes, You got me. I'm Canadian.

[kimosabe]

Yes, You got me. I'm Canadian.
OUCH! he even admitted it! haha, burn!

[IAmCountryMusic]

You're so emo. haha
he could never replace me www.myspace.com/thespringmarch ;)

[soreloser]

he could never replace me www.myspace.com/thespringmarch ;)

Hahaha. Oh god.


...And Canada is a whole hell of a lot more peaceful than the States. I'm happy I live up here.

[apoemtothedead]

Hahaha. Oh god.


...And Canada is a whole hell of a lot more peaceful than the States. I'm happy I live up here.
Of course it's peaceful. You all accept that you make no impact in international/worldly affairs so why bicker over in anything. In the large picture, your lives mean nothing.

[soreloser]

Of course it's peaceful. You all accept that you make no impact in international/worldly affairs so why bicker over in anything. In the large picture, your lives mean nothing.

In the large picture, our lives last longer... because we don't shoot people for taking our parking space.

[apoemtothedead]

In the large picture, our lives last longer... because we don't shoot people for taking our parking space.
You're thinking of the black americans.

[soreloser]

You're thinking of the black americans.

Which is the majority, no?

Doesn't matter, this is a stupid argument.

[apoemtothedead]

No, blacks aren't the majority. Thank God.

And yes this is a stupid argument because Canada doesn't compare to the US.

[IAmCountryMusic]

weed is illegal

i love america :flag::dance: :guns::canada:

[soreloser]

I didn't want to keep going on but I can't let you win that easily. The United States voted in the stupidest politician in history.. TWICE. Now, I'm putting the war and every other fucked up thing he's done aside. I honestly believe that my intellectual capacity exceeds his and he's atleast 30 years my elder. George W. Bush is a dumbass. Which is why he got voted in. You guys needed someone you could relate to. I truly would be embarrassed of my country if he was my leader.

[I'm not talking about a lot of the americans on here... Just the majority of americans.]

[takingback98]

thats some deep shit man.

[apoemtothedead]

I didn't want to keep going on but I can't let you win that easily. The United States voted in the stupidest politician in history.. TWICE. Now, I'm putting the war and every other fucked up thing he's done aside. I honestly believe that my intellectual capacity exceeds his and he's atleast 30 years my elder. George W. Bush is a dumbass. Which is why he got voted in. You guys needed someone you could relate to. I truly would be embarrassed of my country if he was my leader.

[I'm not talking about a lot of the americans on here... Just the majority of americans.]
The first time it wasn't the majority, retard.

[soreloser]

thats some deep shit man.

I'll assume you're talking about my poem. It's my favourite thing I've written, not because I think it's amazing, I dont. I love it because it's the first poem that I've written that truly came from my heart and the things i talk about are real. I also think it can relate to anyone, because everyone has been through a similar situation. I can't stand what I'm going through right now and I just had to get it all off my chest.

[cris545]

feeling-wise its good, it could use some change in structure, i understand how its your favorite poem, cuz of the feelings...thats gonna have some people hate it, cuz they're looking for the greatness of the poem, instead of the feelings behind it. Just keep writing, dont listen to what some morons say.

[tragic.beauty]

wow, awesome poem, emo kid!! <<that's not an insult, i promise. that's how i've been feeling lately, too.

[sweethypocrisy]

***

[ArTkY_]

he could never replace me www.myspace.com/thespringmarch ;)
wow, thats emo-riffic

[soreloser]

***

Well, You're not funny at all. Atleast apoemtothedead has good material. People like you need to die.

[xforestxwaitsx]

No deal. Lame and predictable insults are who I am.

glad you finally recognize it

[apoemtothedead]

glad you finally recognize it
I've always known that.

Now I'll do you. Shitty poems and homosexual tendencies are who you are.

[SicTrnsitGloria]

1. Pretty good lyrics, but i think you could do better, i understand that these are emotional though.
2. Apoemtothedead is funny.
3. America > Canada.

[IAmCountryMusic]

wow, thats emo-riffic
well, yeah:embarasse

[merv the perv]

Your band's myspace needs music Deej......I need to hear my lover's voice. :love:

[punkpixie]

This thread is tres amuseant

[xforestxwaitsx]

I've always known that.

Now I'll do you. Shitty poems and homosexual tendencies are who you are.

Now, now, if we really wanted to expose the real sides of people, we could always use you as an example. For instance, your blatant lack of common sense and your own deep-seated insecurity cause you to put down other people. I really did mean that I was glad you were finally admitting it. You might have known that, but you've never really admitted it before. I see that the little white men who put you in the padded room might have told you that owning up that you have a problem is the first step in "embracing" it. Have a nice day.

[ArTkY_]

Your band's myspace needs music Deej......I need to hear my lover's voice. :love:
He's mine bitch.

[xforestxwaitsx]

He's mine bitch.

Fight fair boys. I'm sure there's enough of him to go around

[ArTkY_]

Fight fair boys. I'm sure there's enough of him to go around
DJ has already pledged himself to me... ALL of him. Now you need to do the same thing.

[xforestxwaitsx]

I pledge allegiance.....oops, wrong one. you have all of me darling, forever and always.

[ArTkY_]

;)

[xforestxwaitsx]

:sex:
:angel2:

[apoemtothedead]

Now, now, if we really wanted to expose the real sides of people, we could always use you as an example. For instance, your blatant lack of common sense and your own deep-seated insecurity cause you to put down other people. I really did mean that I was glad you were finally admitting it. You might have known that, but you've never really admitted it before. I see that the little white men who put you in the padded room might have told you that owning up that you have a problem is the first step in "embracing" it. Have a nice day.
2020 SAT's. 3.8 GPA.

Speaking of common sense, you have no scene power, so your attempting to take away my scene points is useless.

[IAmCountryMusic]

Your band's myspace needs music Deej......I need to hear my lover's voice. :love:
its just me, but im sure ill have some songs up soon ;)

im not a hussy, so you guys cant share me. sorry but i like girls :D

He's mine bitch.

I pledge allegiance.....oops, wrong one. you have all of me darling, forever and always.
hey, i wanted you :(

plus you dont want tariq, he's a terrorist

[ArTkY_]

its just me, but im sure ill have some songs up soon ;)

im not a hussy, so you guys cant share me. sorry but i like girls :D



hey, i wanted you :(

plus you dont want tariq, he's a terrorist
That was quality.

[IAmCountryMusic]

That was quality.
shut up, youre a terrorist