Know Your Own Name

[logantogovcentr]

everything deserves to be romantic, once in a while
but yesterday had arrived late, and it came with a smile
erasing little pieces of characters,
i'm colliding with validity
coagulated corners filled with questionable reflexes
and i'm selling road maps by the stop sign
in case you're wondering, none of the routes are real.
must make you wonder why you're buying at all
it's all in the shape of being quick with sentimental promises
if i'm hiding out, then you're the thread with which i'm covering myself
let's hear it for the long walk home
racing trains on foot to kill the cold
just instigation of emotions keep you in contempt, for sure
let's hear it for the crowd you've built
and the blood from a broken heart you've spilled
i can't relate the relay
silence comes undone while you're just breathing into the phone.
hey, i'm just here for one more weekend
make the best of lost control.
comparing warmth with capabilities.
can you feel the sunlight? i'm just another brick you've stole.
and that's why foundations fall.
well, i could've sworn you knew.
i'm navigating through the racing world without a hardhat on.

[Alex Djaferis]

not bad. not bad at all.
Some of the sentences kind of stick out. But really, its good. better then most other things ive read here.

[ArTkY_]

It's good :)

[Brianfarg]

On a totally unrelated note, the creator of this thread lives about a town away from me.